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12/30/2011 c1 sailex
So first your in to Rio and wright an epic fic for it, and now you do the same for my little pony? Im impresed. You are officaly 20% cooler! No wonder this was on Equestria Daily! This story was one of your best works! Keep it up!
12/12/2011 c1 27EdeatheDemonFox
Aww, this was totally cute. Nice and long, too, which I liked. I liked how creative your idea was and how strongly Dash seemed to keep telling herself that she was Elizabeth and no one else. And how Twilight came to save her. Only Twilight. ^^~
11/8/2011 c1 26side-fish
Hey. I hope you don't mind that I review your story here than in dA. After all, a proper story needs to be reviewed in the proper venue... unless you want reviews like 'This is awesome', 'Cool','[smiley face]' =P.

It was confusing initially. The setting, I mean. You make it sound like World War 2 is happening, yet the mention of Sailor Moon makes it feel like it's in the present time. And yet, Rick says 'I should've joined the war efforts' or something like that somewhere toward the end. Could this war be referring to World War 2 or the war against terrorism.

Next I would like to point is the character of Elizabeth. I mean there's nothing wrong. Just that I would like to know why you picked a German to be Rainbow Dash =P. And I was expecting Rainbow Dash to speak German. Really!

Anyway, your story seems to be very long. But after finding out that it seems to be a one-shot, damn, I feel like it's incomplete. Are you going to update it :)? I just don't know. You left a cliffhanger. At the same time, you wrote 'the end'. Sure it was slow at the start, but the story picked up soon after. I recommend that you continue this, and I will guarantee you, this fanfic will be 20% cooler B).
11/3/2011 c1 Merchant of Menace
That was beautiful.

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