for Perfect Two1/27/2021 c23 Guest
I love the ending!
I love the ending!
6/30/2018 c23 Michelle
Your story was amazing!
Your story was amazing!
6/13/2018 c2 Funny person
Why does Helia sound more like Riven?! Lol
Why does Helia sound more like Riven?! Lol
6/9/2018 c8 goddessqueen222
I am guessing that Helia's rude to Flora because he likes her because he isn't rude to anyone else.
I am guessing that Helia's rude to Flora because he likes her because he isn't rude to anyone else.
3/20/2018 c23 DESIRE
YOU ARE A...(actually i have no word to express my happiness)...GENIOUS.I LOVE IT SO...SO...SO...SO...SO IT IS VERY SHORT,SO I AM UPSET.:-((
YOU ARE A...(actually i have no word to express my happiness)...GENIOUS.I LOVE IT SO...SO...SO...SO...SO IT IS VERY SHORT,SO I AM UPSET.:-((
11/6/2016 c23 dss1
I'm not really going to do constructive criticism so don't really count on it much.
That was good though, the ending was okay. It went slightly fast but what made me smile a lot is the last sentences. That made me have goosebumps a bit. The story went a bit fast considering you did 1,000 words per chapter but it played out nicely. Good job!
I'm not really going to do constructive criticism so don't really count on it much.
That was good though, the ending was okay. It went slightly fast but what made me smile a lot is the last sentences. That made me have goosebumps a bit. The story went a bit fast considering you did 1,000 words per chapter but it played out nicely. Good job!
8/13/2016 c3 
1Tookeyoo
I don't care if people think they are off character. I fell in love with story after reading chapter one. Keep up the good work. Because you are doing a d*mn good job!
1TookeyooI don't care if people think they are off character. I fell in love with story after reading chapter one. Keep up the good work. Because you are doing a d*mn good job!
7/21/2015 c23 Rockmantick
Awwwwwwwww so sweet! It ended with a wedding and I agree with Flora how a bad start ended with a wedding, how weird,but finally I saw a wedding on their story ('cause the others interrupted their wedding)! Anyway cool! (Sorry for my very long comment I'm just exited!)
Awwwwwwwww so sweet! It ended with a wedding and I agree with Flora how a bad start ended with a wedding, how weird,but finally I saw a wedding on their story ('cause the others interrupted their wedding)! Anyway cool! (Sorry for my very long comment I'm just exited!)
7/19/2015 c23 3xBitterSweetDreamsx
I really like this story but it seemed so rushed in the last few chapters. I wanted to see how flora reacted when helia admitted he had never loved anyone until now and the troubles they got into whilst trying to hide their relationship. I really loved the first few chapters but when it got to the end, it became less detailed which was disappointing.
3xBitterSweetDreamsxI really like this story but it seemed so rushed in the last few chapters. I wanted to see how flora reacted when helia admitted he had never loved anyone until now and the troubles they got into whilst trying to hide their relationship. I really loved the first few chapters but when it got to the end, it became less detailed which was disappointing.
6/28/2015 c11 Muskaan
I LOVE FLORA AND HELIA STORIES. THEY ARE THE BEST COUPLE. EVEN IF MY FRIEND THOUGHT KRSTRY AND HELIA ARE BETTER
I LOVE FLORA AND HELIA STORIES. THEY ARE THE BEST COUPLE. EVEN IF MY FRIEND THOUGHT KRSTRY AND HELIA ARE BETTER
4/20/2015 c18 Guest
That was a good/okay chapter but still like it
That was a good/okay chapter but still like it
4/20/2015 c16 Guest
It's obvious but still some people might not know
It's obvious but still some people might not know