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11/9/2017 c19 KrissyAD
honestly read this entirely in the last 2 days, soo loved it!
5/4/2017 c18 1fandomqueen18
I love your story! You should keep writing it. You're an amazing author!
4/24/2017 c18 Annabeth
I just found and read your story! It's great so far and I would love to see you finish it!
12/30/2016 c18 Guest
Yay, an update! Albeit rather short, this was a great chapter- I especially loved Naomi's defiance towards Dabria. She deserved everything she got.

I won't lie, it saddens me to think that the story is coming to a close, but I've loved reading it and can't wait for the end at the same time, if that makes any sense.

Interesting that there's a lake monster, by the way. How did that happen?

Please update soon!
12/1/2016 c17 1SettingStars01
I'm so excited about the update! I jumped around in y room for two minutes straight before I calmed down when I saw that there was another chapter. And I was not disappointed. Once again, your writing was worth the wait and this proved to be a very eventful chapter, which is always great. I'm really glad that Bryan is back, but it's understandable that Naomi has mixed emotions about it. And after Keith betrayed her as well-poor thing will be so guarded now! But I really hope that she will be able to open up and trust other people again. We'll see. Thank you so much for writing such a brilliant story. I'll keep my eyes peeled for the next update.
11/25/2016 c10 1hope79
i really liked this chapter [good job!]
but i thought the recount of the patch/nora story included a lot of extraneous information - i understand that nora was trying to set the scene and not lie to her daughter, but for readers, it gets redundant and a lil boring, so i guess future advice would be to cut down on what readers already know and go into further detail on the new stuff
i absolutely LOVE naomi's character, but i think by enhancing her awesomeness, you downplayed everyone else's, especially patch's.
like, patch is this badass fallen angel; he wouldn't be surprised by a knife, even if it was thrown by his daughter...or (i think it was the last chapter) when all the adults were stunned by her mind tricking abilities
it's an AWESOME story, but these are just some things you can improve on :)
10/17/2016 c9 hope79
the beginning almost made me cry...
maybe you could make the chapters shorter...it seems a little intimidating to read, and it might be easier for you to update...
9/28/2016 c16 1SettingStars01
Sorry that I haven't reviewed before but this is a really amazing fanfic and you deserve as many reviews as possible, so I thought I might as well...
I wish you'd update more but you're a fantastic writer and make up for the waiting with the chapters you post.
WHY DO YOU ALWAYS USE CLIFFHANGERS?! Please, please, please update or I think I may explode -_-
Also, is Bryan ever coming back or is he gone for good? Please update as soon as you can ;)
9/27/2016 c8 1hope79
this chapter was so intense on so many levels it hurts
8/8/2016 c3 hope79
omg...maybe bryan was some guy who was sent to watch her by nora and patch...
8/8/2016 c2 hope79
if nora and naomi had hot bio partners, why can't i?

im so happy that vee and scott got married!
8/8/2016 c1 hope79
i already know that this is going to be an awesome story!

i can't believe NATCH had a baby!

and why isn't it safe?!
6/27/2016 c16 Guest
Hi, I really like this story! Sooooo, when are you posting next?
3/7/2016 c3 Guest
This is good so far I loved the hush hush saga I cried when Scott died but I cried even harder when patch could feel
2/29/2016 c15 5Renesmee27
can't wait for the update! I completely understand <3
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