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5HayleyComet
It's been so long that I'm not even sure you're on this site anymore, but I really hope you update this story at some point.
The dialogue between the children is great, really well thought out and funny, and your characterisations are great.
The original character you've included is very original and interesting, and the plot is actually believable, despite the fact that time turners can only turn back time for 24 hours.
If you do decide to continue this, I'll make sure to review every chapter!
If not, thanks for the read.
5HayleyCometIt's been so long that I'm not even sure you're on this site anymore, but I really hope you update this story at some point.
The dialogue between the children is great, really well thought out and funny, and your characterisations are great.
The original character you've included is very original and interesting, and the plot is actually believable, despite the fact that time turners can only turn back time for 24 hours.
If you do decide to continue this, I'll make sure to review every chapter!
If not, thanks for the read.
8/29/2014 c5 The Farmer
This is awesome! I know it's been three years, but I will cross my fingers and hope your story gets updated.
This is awesome! I know it's been three years, but I will cross my fingers and hope your story gets updated.
7/29/2014 c5 4Skendo
Really like this story :) I am reading this at 1:30 in the morning, and I am having to hold my nose to stop me from laughing out loud - and waking up the house - during the banter between the kids - especially Draco and Harry! Although part of me wishes that it was set during Will, Elizabeth and Jack's adventures! update soon :)
4SkendoReally like this story :) I am reading this at 1:30 in the morning, and I am having to hold my nose to stop me from laughing out loud - and waking up the house - during the banter between the kids - especially Draco and Harry! Although part of me wishes that it was set during Will, Elizabeth and Jack's adventures! update soon :)
10/25/2013 c5 19Smiling Seshat
I really like how you portrayed the characters, and I'll be following this story closely. Good luck with writing the next chapter! :)
19Smiling SeshatI really like how you portrayed the characters, and I'll be following this story closely. Good luck with writing the next chapter! :)
7/22/2013 c5 3Artista321
Agh! Don't stop! I love how you made them all put in their own ideas and have Hermione finde some way to tie them together.
"There was a storm," Hermione said, but at the same moment, Harry said,
"It exploded-"
And Malfoy said- "Sunk by pirates."
"During a ferocious storm, pirates snuck up on our ship, exploded it, and sunk us to the deeps," Hermione said quickly, merging the three stories into one.
Oh my goodness I'm gonna die! I seriously love it.
3Artista321Agh! Don't stop! I love how you made them all put in their own ideas and have Hermione finde some way to tie them together.
"There was a storm," Hermione said, but at the same moment, Harry said,
"It exploded-"
And Malfoy said- "Sunk by pirates."
"During a ferocious storm, pirates snuck up on our ship, exploded it, and sunk us to the deeps," Hermione said quickly, merging the three stories into one.
Oh my goodness I'm gonna die! I seriously love it.
12/28/2012 c5 11elderflowersandwine
You write very, very, very well. All the characters are perfectly sound, and this story is going on my favorites. Most definitely.
11elderflowersandwineYou write very, very, very well. All the characters are perfectly sound, and this story is going on my favorites. Most definitely.
10/15/2012 c5 22Agapostemon
Awesome. I mean really awesome. Seriously. I have no criticism. And that's saying something as I love to criticize things.
22AgapostemonAwesome. I mean really awesome. Seriously. I have no criticism. And that's saying something as I love to criticize things.
8/25/2012 c5 Guest
For the love of Camelot please please please please please please please please do not stop writing this story I LOVE it! The dialog is amazingly written and the characters are just perfect! Loving malfoys comebacks but hope ginny talks a tiny bit more soon even if riddle is possessing her, surly being away from the diay would help her be normal? Xxxxxxxxx
For the love of Camelot please please please please please please please please do not stop writing this story I LOVE it! The dialog is amazingly written and the characters are just perfect! Loving malfoys comebacks but hope ginny talks a tiny bit more soon even if riddle is possessing her, surly being away from the diay would help her be normal? Xxxxxxxxx
4/21/2012 c5 3Silent Pandemonium
Holy hot damn this is marvolous, superb, magnifique and any other hyperbolic adjective I can't remember right now. The dialogues are fantastic and the build up of the plot has a very good pace to it. Extra double browniepoints go to the believable and incredibily well written OC's. Please continue this and I can't wait till the next update.
*Tips an imaginary top hat* Chapeau!
~*~
Silent Pandemonium
3Silent PandemoniumHoly hot damn this is marvolous, superb, magnifique and any other hyperbolic adjective I can't remember right now. The dialogues are fantastic and the build up of the plot has a very good pace to it. Extra double browniepoints go to the believable and incredibily well written OC's. Please continue this and I can't wait till the next update.
*Tips an imaginary top hat* Chapeau!
~*~
Silent Pandemonium
4/2/2012 c5 4JaidenAye
This is incredibly good. I adore it.
Your dialogue is some of the bert I've seen here, hands down.
4JaidenAyeThis is incredibly good. I adore it.
Your dialogue is some of the bert I've seen here, hands down.
3/26/2012 c5 Guest
Pease write about this some more! U R really good at writing!
Pease write about this some more! U R really good at writing!