for Sprigs of Laurel, Tokens of Courtship7/15/2015 c1 Sterre2015
Like the ending with Wash finding that sprig of laurel on her doorstep :) Thanks for sharing!
Like the ending with Wash finding that sprig of laurel on her doorstep :) Thanks for sharing!
12/30/2014 c1 
10Fenrisulven13
Taylor was more than a little creepy in this story but now I understand the sequel to this a lot better.
The way he treated that kid at the beginning was cruel...in the first episode I felt as if Taylor were laying it on Elisabeth not in so many words but still.
Good story, very good written except for a few slips but nothing major.
Hope you write more TN stories.
10Fenrisulven13Taylor was more than a little creepy in this story but now I understand the sequel to this a lot better.
The way he treated that kid at the beginning was cruel...in the first episode I felt as if Taylor were laying it on Elisabeth not in so many words but still.
Good story, very good written except for a few slips but nothing major.
Hope you write more TN stories.
11/5/2011 c1 24stargate
Okay so here is an honest review, with both good and bad, I hope that is okay. So first off, the first chapter was a bit weird but not bad, it just seemed out of character for the commander. I did not like the 2nd chapter because the commander was not himself at ALL. Like so out of charater is made me mad and I almost stopped reading, but I kept reading. However, the end was brillant the last line, made me smile. So it kinda redeemed the story for me. And yes I get that the story was about the commander being lonley I just dont ever see him sinking to the level your story had him sink to. Just my thoughts
You are a talented writer. :)
Okay so here is an honest review, with both good and bad, I hope that is okay. So first off, the first chapter was a bit weird but not bad, it just seemed out of character for the commander. I did not like the 2nd chapter because the commander was not himself at ALL. Like so out of charater is made me mad and I almost stopped reading, but I kept reading. However, the end was brillant the last line, made me smile. So it kinda redeemed the story for me. And yes I get that the story was about the commander being lonley I just dont ever see him sinking to the level your story had him sink to. Just my thoughts
You are a talented writer. :)