for Point of No Return4/8/2015 c1 
13umbrella0326
Oh...
I'm soooooo glad I stumbled across this story. This is one of the best Dave-centric stories I have ever read.
I'm teary-eyed... I was David Karofsky. And, let me tell you, you did NOT exaggerate on Dave's fears about his teammates. You expertly told this story from beginning to end and it gave me chills at the realism of it all.
OK...**wipes a tear** OK... This is a good story. Very, very good story.
13umbrella0326Oh...
I'm soooooo glad I stumbled across this story. This is one of the best Dave-centric stories I have ever read.
I'm teary-eyed... I was David Karofsky. And, let me tell you, you did NOT exaggerate on Dave's fears about his teammates. You expertly told this story from beginning to end and it gave me chills at the realism of it all.
OK...**wipes a tear** OK... This is a good story. Very, very good story.
11/10/2014 c1 7RugBern
I just found this great one-shot, and I love it. I love the explorations of Paul Karofsky's character, and I love the many varistions of that character which we've seen in fan-fiction, based only upon the shred of information given in canon. By far, this is in line with the way I like to see Paul depicted. Of course, you did a great job with Dave and his likely reactions as well. Great work!
7RugBernI just found this great one-shot, and I love it. I love the explorations of Paul Karofsky's character, and I love the many varistions of that character which we've seen in fan-fiction, based only upon the shred of information given in canon. By far, this is in line with the way I like to see Paul depicted. Of course, you did a great job with Dave and his likely reactions as well. Great work!
2/7/2013 c1 45VioletEmeraldx
You had at least 1 typo in here near the beginning but um... wow. Your writing style... EPIC. Seriously.
I love the puns, and the self-acknowledgement within the writing of them, like:
To use a timely pun – he was royally fucked…
and:
He'd been too freaked, though, to think straight (straight? ha!)
Anyway... this was SO well done and they way you write Paul Karofsky... just wow I adore this character. Both of them but the Paul stuff is just somehow more unique. Wow. I adore this oneshot here. Thank you for filling in the gaps of what happened after 2x20 "Prom Queen" and before 3x05 "The First Time".
45VioletEmeraldxYou had at least 1 typo in here near the beginning but um... wow. Your writing style... EPIC. Seriously.
I love the puns, and the self-acknowledgement within the writing of them, like:
To use a timely pun – he was royally fucked…
and:
He'd been too freaked, though, to think straight (straight? ha!)
Anyway... this was SO well done and they way you write Paul Karofsky... just wow I adore this character. Both of them but the Paul stuff is just somehow more unique. Wow. I adore this oneshot here. Thank you for filling in the gaps of what happened after 2x20 "Prom Queen" and before 3x05 "The First Time".
11/14/2011 c1 7deeniebee28
I really liked this exploration of what happened between prom and when we next see Dave. I really would love to see a heart to heart between Dave and Paul on the show.
Love this line:
"That kiss in the locker room hadn't quite been the "accident" he'd tried to make it out to be."
Ah this, this is what the majority of Klainers never get:
""I would never have done it, Dad," he cried, voice frantic. "I didn't mean it! I swear!"
"Sssshhh… I know that, David," Paul said, rubbing soothing circles on the back of Dave's wrinkled suit jacket. "It was a really bad thing to say, but you were scared."
A really excellent one shot =)
7deeniebee28I really liked this exploration of what happened between prom and when we next see Dave. I really would love to see a heart to heart between Dave and Paul on the show.
Love this line:
"That kiss in the locker room hadn't quite been the "accident" he'd tried to make it out to be."
Ah this, this is what the majority of Klainers never get:
""I would never have done it, Dad," he cried, voice frantic. "I didn't mean it! I swear!"
"Sssshhh… I know that, David," Paul said, rubbing soothing circles on the back of Dave's wrinkled suit jacket. "It was a really bad thing to say, but you were scared."
A really excellent one shot =)
11/9/2011 c1 4LizzyPoodle
Brilliant, as always. Heartbreaking. I love him. I love your writing. It always leaves me wanting more...
4LizzyPoodleBrilliant, as always. Heartbreaking. I love him. I love your writing. It always leaves me wanting more...