for Always and Forever: Prequel1/25 c16 Pink Diamonds
I loved this story but I especially loved how Fred and Hermione came together. They really worked well together but I was disliked how she forgave Ron for how he treated her, but typical Harry like his canon counterpart was a Weasleys doormat and his arrogance was off putting. She worked harder than the two boys, and he bloody had the audacity to blame her for his wand breaking when she saved his life and she didn't lay into him. But she didn't have any problems telling Fred off when he came to Shell Cottage. Harry never apologised for blaming her for his wand being broken and didn't apologise to her for saying Voldemort's name where she got tortured at Malfoy Manor.
Harry and fangirl Ginny's relationship wasn't even featured but he supposedly loves her. Anyone with enough brains could see that his feelings for her is because she's from a large family he's desperate to be part of and because like his canon counterpart he's got a huge opedipus complex. She looks like his mother or what a sister would look like if he had one. None of the Weasley boys didn't go out with their mother look-alike.
Fred and Hermione's relationship was beautiful, pure and spent time together, even Ron and Lavender relationship made sense.
I loved this story but I especially loved how Fred and Hermione came together. They really worked well together but I was disliked how she forgave Ron for how he treated her, but typical Harry like his canon counterpart was a Weasleys doormat and his arrogance was off putting. She worked harder than the two boys, and he bloody had the audacity to blame her for his wand breaking when she saved his life and she didn't lay into him. But she didn't have any problems telling Fred off when he came to Shell Cottage. Harry never apologised for blaming her for his wand being broken and didn't apologise to her for saying Voldemort's name where she got tortured at Malfoy Manor.
Harry and fangirl Ginny's relationship wasn't even featured but he supposedly loves her. Anyone with enough brains could see that his feelings for her is because she's from a large family he's desperate to be part of and because like his canon counterpart he's got a huge opedipus complex. She looks like his mother or what a sister would look like if he had one. None of the Weasley boys didn't go out with their mother look-alike.
Fred and Hermione's relationship was beautiful, pure and spent time together, even Ron and Lavender relationship made sense.
11/18/2020 c5 Skylar
Mundungus has always been such a dislikable character. Thank goodness Hermione managed to give them the slip lol
Mundungus has always been such a dislikable character. Thank goodness Hermione managed to give them the slip lol
10/20/2020 c4 Skylar
Yep, this sounds like Ron. I really enjoyed this chapter.
Yep, this sounds like Ron. I really enjoyed this chapter.
10/18/2020 c3 Skylar
Thank you for the translations, my comprehension was mostly guesswork
Thank you for the translations, my comprehension was mostly guesswork
10/18/2020 c2 Skylar
I like reading this from Fred's POV
I like reading this from Fred's POV
10/18/2020 c1 Skylar
I'm with Bill. I'm not sure I could give up family like that if it was necessary.
I'm with Bill. I'm not sure I could give up family like that if it was necessary.
7/19/2019 c1 Lady MEOW
Spelling is my enemy so I apologize in advance for miss spelling in this review and any other...and now her is my review.
I always thought Hermione got over look by how kind she about how selfless she was and how brave she was. It always seed to be Hermione was know for being bossy and smart and VERY smart and at that which she is of course and it not bad for her being know for that but she us so much more too and people seem to forget that. I think Fred always had respect for Hermione I think that this may just increase it. I cant even imagine doing what Hermione did it is indeed both very selfless and brave, I hope nothing will ever happen tomake me feel like I have to do it...but if something ever deed happen I hope I be able to do what Hermione did.
Spelling is my enemy so I apologize in advance for miss spelling in this review and any other...and now her is my review.
I always thought Hermione got over look by how kind she about how selfless she was and how brave she was. It always seed to be Hermione was know for being bossy and smart and VERY smart and at that which she is of course and it not bad for her being know for that but she us so much more too and people seem to forget that. I think Fred always had respect for Hermione I think that this may just increase it. I cant even imagine doing what Hermione did it is indeed both very selfless and brave, I hope nothing will ever happen tomake me feel like I have to do it...but if something ever deed happen I hope I be able to do what Hermione did.
4/2/2019 c10 Englishladdie
carla I'm just had so much hope for Fred and Hermione and nowww you go and say please forgive me?
wow. wow I'm hurt. extremely hurt
extremely hurt. congratulations
carla I'm just had so much hope for Fred and Hermione and nowww you go and say please forgive me?
wow. wow I'm hurt. extremely hurt
extremely hurt. congratulations
4/22/2017 c3 Cow's go moo
Muriel is stuck-up she was that way in the book as I recall. Bill's and Fleurs wedding was lovely up until the point that the Death Eaters desided to show heir ugly facce's (I KNIW they were wask's,you know what I mean.) and mess up every thing (just like they always do), I'm glad that they were able have at least most of there wedding before the Death Eaters came. Harry Harry Harry Harry way do you have to be such a Niga-poop why? Why? why? Why? Lupin said it all as he handed Hermione back her wand and the Twins wands (well kind of the Twins wands back) I hope that Hermione take up on the Twins offer of being on their team, seeming how she Ron and Harry can't be on the same team. They also work really really good together, glad that they were able to change Hermione to look like one of Fleur's and that Fleur was quick respond.
Muriel is stuck-up she was that way in the book as I recall. Bill's and Fleurs wedding was lovely up until the point that the Death Eaters desided to show heir ugly facce's (I KNIW they were wask's,you know what I mean.) and mess up every thing (just like they always do), I'm glad that they were able have at least most of there wedding before the Death Eaters came. Harry Harry Harry Harry way do you have to be such a Niga-poop why? Why? why? Why? Lupin said it all as he handed Hermione back her wand and the Twins wands (well kind of the Twins wands back) I hope that Hermione take up on the Twins offer of being on their team, seeming how she Ron and Harry can't be on the same team. They also work really really good together, glad that they were able to change Hermione to look like one of Fleur's and that Fleur was quick respond.
4/21/2017 c2 Cow's go moo
Moody could have been kinder to Molly after all all but two of her children (Genny because she too young and Charlie because his in Romania and no doubt helping out in some way, in the fight against Voldermort.) not to mention her husband and Hermione who like she does with Harry cares very !much about. I know that there in a war but still he doesn' have to be a complete jerk which he was being. Harry is really clueless at times, there do many other reason why they are doing it if he just stop being an neg-go-poop. That got to be tough on Fred to see his twin get hit and totally unable to do anything about it. Hope George is okay.
Moody could have been kinder to Molly after all all but two of her children (Genny because she too young and Charlie because his in Romania and no doubt helping out in some way, in the fight against Voldermort.) not to mention her husband and Hermione who like she does with Harry cares very !much about. I know that there in a war but still he doesn' have to be a complete jerk which he was being. Harry is really clueless at times, there do many other reason why they are doing it if he just stop being an neg-go-poop. That got to be tough on Fred to see his twin get hit and totally unable to do anything about it. Hope George is okay.
4/16/2017 c1 Cow's go moo
Poor Hermione I'm glad that Fred was able to get Hermione to feel better. He is right Hermione did do the right thing and her parents are safe because of it. I like Fred don't think I'd be able to do what Hermione did, for as Bill said not many could do something like that. It takes someone who is (in my opinion) equally selfless and brave. I wonder why Ron wasn't the one there; what mean is would he have be expecting for Hermione to do something like this?
Poor Hermione I'm glad that Fred was able to get Hermione to feel better. He is right Hermione did do the right thing and her parents are safe because of it. I like Fred don't think I'd be able to do what Hermione did, for as Bill said not many could do something like that. It takes someone who is (in my opinion) equally selfless and brave. I wonder why Ron wasn't the one there; what mean is would he have be expecting for Hermione to do something like this?
1/12/2017 c1 Crazy Me
Poor Hermioneshe did a exstreamly selfless. She did something that noone should have to do no matter there age but for a child (I know she 17 or 18 but she still a child) is so very very sad. I'm happy that Fred was there fore Hermione he may not have dune a lot but he did the only thing that he could think of at the time, which for not knowing what to do was pretty good. Fred is right Hermione did do the right thing and she knew it she said it herself that she had to it just took Fred saying that is was the right thing to do for her to believe that she did.I like what Bill said I often fill as if quite a few people both people that read the Harry Potter books and the characters of Harry Potter books fore get that Hermione is both selfless and brave and not just smart.
Poor Hermioneshe did a exstreamly selfless. She did something that noone should have to do no matter there age but for a child (I know she 17 or 18 but she still a child) is so very very sad. I'm happy that Fred was there fore Hermione he may not have dune a lot but he did the only thing that he could think of at the time, which for not knowing what to do was pretty good. Fred is right Hermione did do the right thing and she knew it she said it herself that she had to it just took Fred saying that is was the right thing to do for her to believe that she did.I like what Bill said I often fill as if quite a few people both people that read the Harry Potter books and the characters of Harry Potter books fore get that Hermione is both selfless and brave and not just smart.
10/15/2016 c16 
3Neakco
Loved the prequel loved the original. Almost wish for a sequel. Almost. The story is quiteven okay where it is. All loose ends tidied up. But after the sad ending plan to go back and reread the original. You have talent. Forevermore should you write. For your own enjoyment and therefore for others.
3NeakcoLoved the prequel loved the original. Almost wish for a sequel. Almost. The story is quiteven okay where it is. All loose ends tidied up. But after the sad ending plan to go back and reread the original. You have talent. Forevermore should you write. For your own enjoyment and therefore for others.