
12/2/2018 c15
51Tamuril2
Oh my...Mozzie was down right scary in this. I loved how you handled his "justice". Any chance you might write some fill-in stories? I'd love the see one from Mozzie's POV and the prisoners POV. Please?

Oh my...Mozzie was down right scary in this. I loved how you handled his "justice". Any chance you might write some fill-in stories? I'd love the see one from Mozzie's POV and the prisoners POV. Please?
6/23/2016 c15
3PastOneonta
This was very different. I knew at the beginning that Neal could not be dead but got more and more uncertain with each chapter. That made a captivating plot for sure! I hated the thought of the hanging in Neal's memory and experience but it seems as though he overcame it. Not only did he survive but he had an opportunity to become someone else and start over. Thanks to Mozzie. And Peter who agreed that Neal had earned his freedom. Thanks for sharing, I am going to see what else you have written.

This was very different. I knew at the beginning that Neal could not be dead but got more and more uncertain with each chapter. That made a captivating plot for sure! I hated the thought of the hanging in Neal's memory and experience but it seems as though he overcame it. Not only did he survive but he had an opportunity to become someone else and start over. Thanks to Mozzie. And Peter who agreed that Neal had earned his freedom. Thanks for sharing, I am going to see what else you have written.
2/23/2015 c15 Guest
Awesome story!
Awesome story!
2/22/2015 c15 Guest
Awesome story!
Awesome story!
8/31/2012 c15
48BlueDiamondStar
OMG! OMG! OMG!
I don't know what to say...
Brilliant, amazing... BEAUTIFUL!
Simply beautiful to no end.
And, as much as of a con I wouldn't be myself, and didn't have some things common with Neal, I sincerely admit I really cried while reading...
And I do cry over stories very very rarely...

OMG! OMG! OMG!
I don't know what to say...
Brilliant, amazing... BEAUTIFUL!
Simply beautiful to no end.
And, as much as of a con I wouldn't be myself, and didn't have some things common with Neal, I sincerely admit I really cried while reading...
And I do cry over stories very very rarely...
2/29/2012 c14
7Freckle Red
you know without me telling me that I loved the story. I just had to review it again to add it to my fvorites. :)

you know without me telling me that I loved the story. I just had to review it again to add it to my fvorites. :)
2/19/2012 c15 Freckle Red
This story really surprised me, it was excellent and kept my attention throughout the entire story. Mozzie is great and I like to see him written as smart and conning, like he should be. Nice Job.
This story really surprised me, it was excellent and kept my attention throughout the entire story. Mozzie is great and I like to see him written as smart and conning, like he should be. Nice Job.
1/8/2012 c9 whitecollar18
Throughout this whole story so far i was screaming No No Neal isnt dead! And then it turns out he wasnt...but then he died again in this chapter ;(. Sad story but none the less a good story
Throughout this whole story so far i was screaming No No Neal isnt dead! And then it turns out he wasnt...but then he died again in this chapter ;(. Sad story but none the less a good story
12/4/2011 c15 HAMUCHA
(I hope you enjoyed my first fanfic. )
I loved it!
But if I may, I was kinda expecting a hug or teary eyes or something emotional from Peter when he saw his friend on the bed, alive. After all when he thought his friend was dead, he passed out, and emotionally wrecked.
(I hope you enjoyed my first fanfic. )
I loved it!
But if I may, I was kinda expecting a hug or teary eyes or something emotional from Peter when he saw his friend on the bed, alive. After all when he thought his friend was dead, he passed out, and emotionally wrecked.
12/2/2011 c13 HAMUCHA
I only seems that the girl was in trouble for having abusive boyfriend. But why she's given money. Did she has money trouble also?
I only seems that the girl was in trouble for having abusive boyfriend. But why she's given money. Did she has money trouble also?
11/30/2011 c15
2extremebandgeek
I enjoyed this story so much! I was always excited to see a new chapter go up. I'm going to miss it now, but I can't wait to see your next story. Great job!

I enjoyed this story so much! I was always excited to see a new chapter go up. I'm going to miss it now, but I can't wait to see your next story. Great job!
11/30/2011 c12 HAMUCHA
("What about the body that was cremated, please tell me you didn't kill some innocent soul to cover for Neal's death." "No suit, I did not!" Mozzie laughed and with that he went into the room and closed the door. Very softly, he added, "There was nothing innocent about him!")
Who was it? Was it the abusive police officer that arrested Neal?
("What about the body that was cremated, please tell me you didn't kill some innocent soul to cover for Neal's death." "No suit, I did not!" Mozzie laughed and with that he went into the room and closed the door. Very softly, he added, "There was nothing innocent about him!")
Who was it? Was it the abusive police officer that arrested Neal?
11/30/2011 c11 HAMUCHA
Good. So Neal's seriously sick. I hate to imagine that he faked the whole prison thing. It'd be too cruel to Peter and the others.
Good. So Neal's seriously sick. I hate to imagine that he faked the whole prison thing. It'd be too cruel to Peter and the others.