
18h c1 Natalie4q6
I stumbled upon Storio (storioai dot com) yesterday — really interesting. The AI writing assistant speeds up drafting significantly. Felt like a nice tool for anyone doing interactive fiction.
I stumbled upon Storio (storioai dot com) yesterday — really interesting. The AI writing assistant speeds up drafting significantly. Felt like a nice tool for anyone doing interactive fiction.
4/17 c1 Applejuice3357
It is an amazing story. I really love it .Please keep writing it. I really love the interaction between Harry and Tome Riddle from another world in chapter 17.
It is an amazing story. I really love it .Please keep writing it. I really love the interaction between Harry and Tome Riddle from another world in chapter 17.
4/11 c18
13bearblue
This is such a frustrating, yet great story. Well done. I look forward to any more that you might post, but if this was it, I feel it was well worth the read. Thank you for sharing this.

This is such a frustrating, yet great story. Well done. I look forward to any more that you might post, but if this was it, I feel it was well worth the read. Thank you for sharing this.
4/2 c18
1Reviachi
Thank god youre still updating. This story is too great to be left unfinished. Take your time though. Life gets in the way and thats ok. This is probably just a hobby and its only right that you get to enjoy it at your own pace. Thank you for writing this!

Thank god youre still updating. This story is too great to be left unfinished. Take your time though. Life gets in the way and thats ok. This is probably just a hobby and its only right that you get to enjoy it at your own pace. Thank you for writing this!
3/23 c18
3SchwarzShifter
I didn’t realise this was still updating! I want more of it so badly; it seems like we’re so close! I hope to see it finished one day 3

I didn’t realise this was still updating! I want more of it so badly; it seems like we’re so close! I hope to see it finished one day 3
2/11 c18 Guest
Well, this has been a ride! Here's to the hope of an update.
Well, this has been a ride! Here's to the hope of an update.
2/4 c18 bologniusgir
This is such a well done universe hop fic! The dynamic between Harry and his friends is so sweet, and I really enjoy the alternate universe youve made ️️️
This is such a well done universe hop fic! The dynamic between Harry and his friends is so sweet, and I really enjoy the alternate universe youve made ️️️
1/24 c13 sunsethill
I have read many stories of this general genre, but you have managed to do several interesting things with this. I'm enjoying the unusual cast of characters taken to the new world, and now, the intrigue about what is actually going on with Harry and Tom-and isn't that an interesting twist. I'm glad I noticed the update on this story in someone's favorite list.
I have read many stories of this general genre, but you have managed to do several interesting things with this. I'm enjoying the unusual cast of characters taken to the new world, and now, the intrigue about what is actually going on with Harry and Tom-and isn't that an interesting twist. I'm glad I noticed the update on this story in someone's favorite list.
1/22 c18
1BookLover186
Bloody hell, this fic is fucking excellent and I'm so glad I found it! Continue updating, please!

Bloody hell, this fic is fucking excellent and I'm so glad I found it! Continue updating, please!
1/18 c1 SomeGuyFawkes
Chapter 1 is a great backfill of canon.
The next few chapters could use some edits.
But I'm glad I stuck it out as the plot and characters evolved nicely. The plot points fit canon well and I'm fully engaged by chapter 18.
This Luna is especially good and I can't help but wonder if all of the "hoppers" might elect to stay in this new 'verse once the big-bad bites it. (Ron being the only one with a possibly compelling reasons to want to go back.)
Chapter 1 is a great backfill of canon.
The next few chapters could use some edits.
But I'm glad I stuck it out as the plot and characters evolved nicely. The plot points fit canon well and I'm fully engaged by chapter 18.
This Luna is especially good and I can't help but wonder if all of the "hoppers" might elect to stay in this new 'verse once the big-bad bites it. (Ron being the only one with a possibly compelling reasons to want to go back.)
12/31/2024 c18
7hjcallipygian
This story is so good! Glad to see it's alive and still kicking. Hoping that you can write it in the future without bad things having to befall you first.

This story is so good! Glad to see it's alive and still kicking. Hoping that you can write it in the future without bad things having to befall you first.
12/21/2024 c1 Guest
So happy to find this updated after all this time! It's one I always came back to to check. Bravo!
You have to keep going, it's too good.
So happy to find this updated after all this time! It's one I always came back to to check. Bravo!
You have to keep going, it's too good.
12/20/2024 c18 Fuck Names
Oh my God, actual progression, a version of Tom killed and two horcruxes destroyed as well. Wow, wow, wow. Read so many stories where it all goes wrong and this is such a breath of fresh air. Fantastic story, looking forward to an update hopefully before the end of next year lol. This was riveting to read.
Oh my God, actual progression, a version of Tom killed and two horcruxes destroyed as well. Wow, wow, wow. Read so many stories where it all goes wrong and this is such a breath of fresh air. Fantastic story, looking forward to an update hopefully before the end of next year lol. This was riveting to read.