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11/15/2020 c2 2Cmilq Ttyl
why did I think that David was about to say "Seth... I need to tell you something... I'm gay"
11/1/2020 c11 Guest
# Nobody likes seth. Why didnt the others get grounded they helped.
9/24/2017 c30 chasaroo
Loved the ending!
6/26/2017 c30 Rayah19
This story was REALLY good and I LOVED it!
3/25/2016 c28 Jeff
Why is it always Kendra not any other characters? Plus I doubt the fairy queen would help her directly.
3/24/2016 c17 Jeff
No offence, but BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORING!
4/24/2015 c30 NasaBri13
still amazing.
2/23/2015 c30 EarlJYu
Awesome
12/16/2013 c28 1RussianGod5
aww, i thought that seth would be the Demonprime and save the day
12/4/2013 c28 bob
when does Seth get a supermode
5/17/2013 c30 YIN YANG
NEGITIVE COMMENTS: WHY R U MAKING SETH SEEM SO WEAK AND STUPID HES THE COOLEST AND BEST CHARECTER IN THE BOOK

POSOTIVE COMMENTS: YOU ARE A REALY GREAT WRITTER AND YOU COME UP WITH GREAT IDEAS LIKE FAIRYPRIME AND Khaarupt SO YAAAA!

OVERALL: YOU ARE GREAT BUT I THINK YOU SHOULD MAKE SETH MORE POWERFULL HE DOESNT HAVE TO BE EXTREMLY POWEFULL BUT HE SHOULD AT LEAST MATCH KENDRAS FAIRY PRIME MAYBE HE COULD HOST ANOTHER DEMON BUT THIS TIME A DYING DEMON AND TAKE ITS POWER OR SOMETHING BUT HE SHOULD STAY GOOD ANYWAY GREAT STORY'S
1/7/2013 c30 Alcarinquellin
The end was almost happily ever after... But not too perfect that it was boring. Clover's proposal cracked me up! Maybe the possible-next-story will solve Warren's fairy-something? Very nice job, though some of it was a bit rushed. Loved it.
8/2/2012 c19 1FableWolf
Damn this story is awesome, i probably said that already but its true! please update soon!
7/30/2012 c1 1mrdirtguy3
Great story good read
7/9/2012 c16 Kylie
This story is very good. I hope you continue writing for this soon! I like this story a lot.
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