
10/25/2012 c2 ManifestDoom
Oh.
Well.
This was...wow.
And yet, I'm compelled to find out what happens next.
Hm.
Oh.
Well.
This was...wow.
And yet, I'm compelled to find out what happens next.
Hm.
11/26/2011 c2 0mors0
Uh, yeah...the rating needs to be higher if this type of content is in it. Atleast change the rating to T
Uh, yeah...the rating needs to be higher if this type of content is in it. Atleast change the rating to T
11/21/2011 c3
17bummersummer
Poor Blacky! And I can tell White lubs him already ^^. But still, the Captain is a a$$. But thats a start of a definite plot.

Poor Blacky! And I can tell White lubs him already ^^. But still, the Captain is a a$$. But thats a start of a definite plot.
11/12/2011 c2 bummersummer
Poor Black! He can get beaten, but not raped! This is so sad, but pleas continue so I know White and Black are okay.
Poor Black! He can get beaten, but not raped! This is so sad, but pleas continue so I know White and Black are okay.
11/12/2011 c1 bummersummer
Please continue this... Although I adore this pairing, the captain must be molester♪ XD
Please continue this... Although I adore this pairing, the captain must be molester♪ XD
11/11/2011 c1 fite585
Very interesting. the cliffhanger keeps me wanting to read more... keep posting!
Very interesting. the cliffhanger keeps me wanting to read more... keep posting!