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11Renata MM
I really liked your story. I would love to read more details.
Who was Mum's first husband? Was he in the Order too?
What Fay tought about Harry before the 5th year? Did she think that he was lying or she believe in he?
Was she a part of the DA in the 5th year? And in the 7th?
I understand the concept, but I think that Fay is so interesting that I'm always wanting to know more about her.
11Renata MMI really liked your story. I would love to read more details.
Who was Mum's first husband? Was he in the Order too?
What Fay tought about Harry before the 5th year? Did she think that he was lying or she believe in he?
Was she a part of the DA in the 5th year? And in the 7th?
I understand the concept, but I think that Fay is so interesting that I'm always wanting to know more about her.
8/22/2014 c1 3almanera
Ah, you created a little sister for Fay! That's adorable. Fay is an interesting character, I like the info we have about her - she wanted to be an Auror and seeing how it's something of a "super cool career", I totally deem Fay automatically cool as well - just like Tonks - just a cool character.
Adorable chapter :)
3almaneraAh, you created a little sister for Fay! That's adorable. Fay is an interesting character, I like the info we have about her - she wanted to be an Auror and seeing how it's something of a "super cool career", I totally deem Fay automatically cool as well - just like Tonks - just a cool character.
Adorable chapter :)
2/26/2012 c6 16coloringbooksandstamps
I really liked this chapter. Your story has inspired me to write a Fay story as well. :)
16coloringbooksandstampsI really liked this chapter. Your story has inspired me to write a Fay story as well. :)
2/13/2012 c1 jaergkeagk
This story could be much greater, even from the first chapter, if there was more detail than just mainly dialogue. More explaining and such. But the story has potential and I'll be reading. Other than that you did great.
On that note, I would like to refer you to a creative roleplaying site called Rocky Mountain International (www. rmimagic .com). From this story it looks like you'd fit in wonderfully with the other creative writers there, and I think they need a staff member right now too. You should definitely take a look. :)
And PM me if you have any questions. I can delightedly tell you that my character's name is Nicols, and that it has so far been a great experience for me!
This story could be much greater, even from the first chapter, if there was more detail than just mainly dialogue. More explaining and such. But the story has potential and I'll be reading. Other than that you did great.
On that note, I would like to refer you to a creative roleplaying site called Rocky Mountain International (www. rmimagic .com). From this story it looks like you'd fit in wonderfully with the other creative writers there, and I think they need a staff member right now too. You should definitely take a look. :)
And PM me if you have any questions. I can delightedly tell you that my character's name is Nicols, and that it has so far been a great experience for me!
11/11/2011 c1 Terebellida
Your intro/summary.
But fist she must deal with her younger sister - first. Shows how spell checkers can miss mistakes.
Chapter One - hmm, such a short chapter might work but I would have waited until you had a second chapter. Right now, there's nothing there.
Your intro/summary.
But fist she must deal with her younger sister - first. Shows how spell checkers can miss mistakes.
Chapter One - hmm, such a short chapter might work but I would have waited until you had a second chapter. Right now, there's nothing there.