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12/26/2012 c1 1LordMortem
( thats sad...
4/9/2012 c1 6ShoeNinja
This was a beautifully written piece. Thank you for sharing it!
12/6/2011 c1 1twitchy witchy girl
a very interestinng take on the aftermath. sweet short and precise. good job.
11/13/2011 c1 1sakurazukamori8
Good writing. But the story was not original at all.

Everybody write the same. "Ozai, I hate you, you're the worst father..."

But I have a question : why Zuko needs to see his father if he despises him so much? He only have to forget him alone in his cage.

As for Ozai. He knows perfectly well his son's feeling, so, I'm afraid he can't cry about that. he has the same feeling about Zuko.

In fact, yoyr zuko is too childisch to be a real bastard toward his father. Ozai has to laugh about his weack son. And He has right to to it.
11/12/2011 c1 12Sandra Phillips
Well written! I like how you portrayed Ozai as selfishly hating Zuko for stealing Ursa's love - a good and original idea.
11/12/2011 c1 Omnom
Oh my gosh! This is a brilliant and sad one-shot! Great job!
11/12/2011 c1 27Carrot-Bunny
One word: Bravo.

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