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31Nana56
Very enjoyable! I was a little afraid for a bit that Jim would find out what Dean did or something and then there would be trouble. Glad it worked out okay. :D
My stomach hurts just thinking about sampling all those pies! A judge really has to enjoy the work! Of course, we do know Dean is a champion eater, so no way it would bother him. lol
Nicely done. :)
31Nana56Very enjoyable! I was a little afraid for a bit that Jim would find out what Dean did or something and then there would be trouble. Glad it worked out okay. :D
My stomach hurts just thinking about sampling all those pies! A judge really has to enjoy the work! Of course, we do know Dean is a champion eater, so no way it would bother him. lol
Nicely done. :)
11/27/2011 c3 93Partly
Wonderful job. Not only do you capture the characters and their voices but you do a great job of keeping interest in the story. You also did a great job with the shooting contest - it had genuine tension. Great job!
93PartlyWonderful job. Not only do you capture the characters and their voices but you do a great job of keeping interest in the story. You also did a great job with the shooting contest - it had genuine tension. Great job!
11/26/2011 c3 411OpheliacAngel
Loved the ending, very much enjoyed the story.
Hope you'll write more stuff like this in the future :)
411OpheliacAngelLoved the ending, very much enjoyed the story.
Hope you'll write more stuff like this in the future :)
11/21/2011 c3 125Tifaching
I can't tell you how much I love that they met for a totally non supernatural, non criminal reason.
This was amazing and I loved their little contest at the shooting gallery and that Dean won.
Nice look at a non hunting interlude in Dean's life!
125TifachingI can't tell you how much I love that they met for a totally non supernatural, non criminal reason.
This was amazing and I loved their little contest at the shooting gallery and that Dean won.
Nice look at a non hunting interlude in Dean's life!
11/21/2011 c1 Tifaching
Okay, I'm really loving this so far. Can't wait until Dean meets up with Jim. And Amanda seems like just Dean's type of girl.
Nice beginning!
Okay, I'm really loving this so far. Can't wait until Dean meets up with Jim. And Amanda seems like just Dean's type of girl.
Nice beginning!
11/17/2011 c2 411OpheliacAngel
I remember you mentioning this when we were talking a while back, sorry it took me so long to review.
I think I'm going to have to watch the Sentinel, your writing is enticing me.
I'm really enjoying it so far, the writing is great, the crossover with SPN is perfect, and I love love love the addition of pie. Makes me want some right about now.
I'm anticipating your next chapter :)
411OpheliacAngelI remember you mentioning this when we were talking a while back, sorry it took me so long to review.
I think I'm going to have to watch the Sentinel, your writing is enticing me.
I'm really enjoying it so far, the writing is great, the crossover with SPN is perfect, and I love love love the addition of pie. Makes me want some right about now.
I'm anticipating your next chapter :)