for Harry Potter and Women Wonders9/1/2022 c1 Guest
It was an interesting premise, but it's a shame that it never went further than this as it had a lot of potential.
It was an interesting premise, but it's a shame that it never went further than this as it had a lot of potential.
7/17/2021 c1 taimu shu
Looking forward to more of this. Kind of feels like a quasi trans girl Harry fic but not at the same time.
For improvement stick to the multi point of view thing it makes for good writing. Single POV’s end up feeling annoying.
Suggestions for future of this fic maybe include some flash backs of Harry feeling better in female form vs male form and feeling a kind of sick/pain/dysphoria from staying male but at the same time trying to hide due to fear of persecution.
Again looking forward to more of this thanks.
Looking forward to more of this. Kind of feels like a quasi trans girl Harry fic but not at the same time.
For improvement stick to the multi point of view thing it makes for good writing. Single POV’s end up feeling annoying.
Suggestions for future of this fic maybe include some flash backs of Harry feeling better in female form vs male form and feeling a kind of sick/pain/dysphoria from staying male but at the same time trying to hide due to fear of persecution.
Again looking forward to more of this thanks.
5/25/2021 c1 
4BROMBROS
okay this story is going to be interesting. I've come across an anime where there is a curse on the main character that turns him into a girl. But I have no clue if that is where you are going with this story so I shall just follow this story to see where it will go.
4BROMBROSokay this story is going to be interesting. I've come across an anime where there is a curse on the main character that turns him into a girl. But I have no clue if that is where you are going with this story so I shall just follow this story to see where it will go.
2/13/2018 c1 Nox
I guess
No sexy time between
VHarry and Fleur
Good a the same
I guess
No sexy time between
VHarry and Fleur
Good a the same
1/10/2016 c1 Guest
Please update! I really really really like your story and I would like to read more!
Please update! I really really really like your story and I would like to read more!
11/3/2012 c1 Eve
I sugest voldemort stay the same,although its your choice.
I sugest voldemort stay the same,although its your choice.
10/6/2012 c1 1Quackpotty
Interesting story so far. I think I read it a long time ago, so here's a review and me placing it on alert so that if you decide you'd like to continue it, you can and I'll read. Thanks!
1QuackpottyInteresting story so far. I think I read it a long time ago, so here's a review and me placing it on alert so that if you decide you'd like to continue it, you can and I'll read. Thanks!
6/19/2012 c1 1Toby860
He should of got it from his mother (reason she was so popular) and his father had unknown veela ancestors. Please continue this story.
1Toby860He should of got it from his mother (reason she was so popular) and his father had unknown veela ancestors. Please continue this story.
6/6/2012 c1 2anikky
wow i really like the plot of this story, i think there were some grammar and spelling errors but that was all. i personaly think fleur should be bi just to get along with harry's character better. i think voldemort should still be male because i just cant imagine harry hating him as much as he would if he were male because harry would feel empathy for the female thing. as for how he got his powers i think you should just go with what you feel is best. really looking forward to more.
2anikkywow i really like the plot of this story, i think there were some grammar and spelling errors but that was all. i personaly think fleur should be bi just to get along with harry's character better. i think voldemort should still be male because i just cant imagine harry hating him as much as he would if he were male because harry would feel empathy for the female thing. as for how he got his powers i think you should just go with what you feel is best. really looking forward to more.
4/14/2012 c1 Silverwind54
interesting and original history, im have never like the femharry history but this one had cacth my attention.
im think that you shouldn't put Voldemort as a girl ( it will give me nightmare for all the life), im think you can explain by saying that lily was some kind of dormant veela or that she or James have veela ancestry and that harry is some kind of veela male or not, and that because of the killing curse plus the blocks that dumbledore put it his magic ( this one is it you are gonna make some dumbledore bashing) made his veela ascentry resufarce or for the male theory it change him a fem veela instead.
as for the fleur straight or bi... im suggest bi so that it you decide harry is gonna both then fleur can learn to love him.
interesting and original history, im have never like the femharry history but this one had cacth my attention.
im think that you shouldn't put Voldemort as a girl ( it will give me nightmare for all the life), im think you can explain by saying that lily was some kind of dormant veela or that she or James have veela ancestry and that harry is some kind of veela male or not, and that because of the killing curse plus the blocks that dumbledore put it his magic ( this one is it you are gonna make some dumbledore bashing) made his veela ascentry resufarce or for the male theory it change him a fem veela instead.
as for the fleur straight or bi... im suggest bi so that it you decide harry is gonna both then fleur can learn to love him.