12/26/2011 c2 14PoppyPotter
I wish there was more! I really enjoyed it- it might have been short but it was really well written and really really sweet.
I wish there was more! I really enjoyed it- it might have been short but it was really well written and really really sweet.
12/24/2011 c1 54sick-atxxheart
This was beautiful. I love the use of italics, and I am always obsessed with anything written in second person. I usually really dislike reading anything that's next-gen, but this was so sweet, honest, and well-written that I couldn't resist it. Great job.
This was beautiful. I love the use of italics, and I am always obsessed with anything written in second person. I usually really dislike reading anything that's next-gen, but this was so sweet, honest, and well-written that I couldn't resist it. Great job.
11/17/2011 c1 3Love without expectation
this is very nice :) U covered so much of their story in a few words..well done!
this is very nice :) U covered so much of their story in a few words..well done!
11/13/2011 c1 11Sara60691
This was beautiful. I love the style and the emphasis on words. I hope you write more (and longer) pieces.
This was beautiful. I love the style and the emphasis on words. I hope you write more (and longer) pieces.
11/13/2011 c1 70littlegirlgonemad
ah ha! this is lovely and dreamy and yet so real
loved it:)
write more
ah ha! this is lovely and dreamy and yet so real
loved it:)
write more
11/13/2011 c1 22orphan.accounts
This is perfect! It's small yet really sweet:D
And I love nothing more than this line:
"Because he's Scorpius and you're Rose and it was always supposed to happen but it was never allowed. Yet, there's no stopping it, because you are one, and he's your hope, and you only have so much strength before you break."
I do realize this is almost an entire paragraph but Ilove the way its written! Your writing style gives a nice atmosphere to the story!
I'd love to read more ScoRose stories from you:D
This is perfect! It's small yet really sweet:D
And I love nothing more than this line:
"Because he's Scorpius and you're Rose and it was always supposed to happen but it was never allowed. Yet, there's no stopping it, because you are one, and he's your hope, and you only have so much strength before you break."
I do realize this is almost an entire paragraph but Ilove the way its written! Your writing style gives a nice atmosphere to the story!
I'd love to read more ScoRose stories from you:D