for Let Go11/13/2011 c13 
19BellaFlan
Yeah... good ending. It makes sense with the themes you set up. Part of me still hoped lol, but yeah, you made the right choice. This is beautifully written and hardly any typos or grammar issues that I noticed which is crazy! Unbeta'd? Dude.
I love you and stuff.
R xo
19BellaFlanYeah... good ending. It makes sense with the themes you set up. Part of me still hoped lol, but yeah, you made the right choice. This is beautifully written and hardly any typos or grammar issues that I noticed which is crazy! Unbeta'd? Dude.
I love you and stuff.
R xo
11/13/2011 c12 BellaFlan
So, this is very Titanic: ""If you slip, I slip. Remember? No matter what, we're together. I won't be away from you again."" which confirms my belief you're foreshadowing a sad end.
So, this is very Titanic: ""If you slip, I slip. Remember? No matter what, we're together. I won't be away from you again."" which confirms my belief you're foreshadowing a sad end.
11/13/2011 c11 BellaFlan
My heart hurts and I don't know how to review. My kid just said to me, "if there are cracks in concrete grass can grow." I'm not sure why, but it seemed relevant. It's probably not. Your words are pretty and sharp like a knife.
My heart hurts and I don't know how to review. My kid just said to me, "if there are cracks in concrete grass can grow." I'm not sure why, but it seemed relevant. It's probably not. Your words are pretty and sharp like a knife.
11/13/2011 c13 18Maplestyle
Thanks for sharing this amazing little story with us. Broke my heart. Very well written!
18MaplestyleThanks for sharing this amazing little story with us. Broke my heart. Very well written!
11/13/2011 c10 Just Sus
Always the pressure to succeed...and be something you aren't. I hope he gives in, and gets well. And her, too! So sad!
Always the pressure to succeed...and be something you aren't. I hope he gives in, and gets well. And her, too! So sad!
11/13/2011 c9 BellaFlan
Oh god. I've just realized you're not going to give this story a happy ending.
Oh god. I've just realized you're not going to give this story a happy ending.
11/13/2011 c13 2lisamichelle17
I am so proud of you for writing this. The ending hurt but it was realistic. We all hear about the stories about successful recoveries from addiction and rarely do we hear about the ones that fail. Edward and Bella tried, valiantly, I like to think. They succumbed to the addiction after trying so hard. Nobody is at fault, well except maybe James for providing the drugs. I like to think there is a special place in hell for people like him. If anyone flames you, I would personally like to bitch slap them.
2lisamichelle17I am so proud of you for writing this. The ending hurt but it was realistic. We all hear about the stories about successful recoveries from addiction and rarely do we hear about the ones that fail. Edward and Bella tried, valiantly, I like to think. They succumbed to the addiction after trying so hard. Nobody is at fault, well except maybe James for providing the drugs. I like to think there is a special place in hell for people like him. If anyone flames you, I would personally like to bitch slap them.
11/13/2011 c12 2lisamichelle17
They are trying so hard. I want to fight for them to make it. So much so.
2lisamichelle17They are trying so hard. I want to fight for them to make it. So much so.