8/1/2012 c13 ArekWhitlock
no no no no no no no...why!
they weren't ready..completely selfish!
thnk you for writing this story...
no no no no no no no...why!
they weren't ready..completely selfish!
thnk you for writing this story...
7/13/2012 c13 twilightobsessed40873a
This hits all to close to home for me. Up til about 6 months ago I done alot of the same things & then some for my brother. No matter how dangerous the place, the people or what it time it was. I'd go get him sober him up & wait for the time. I got the phone a little after 2 a.m. that he overdosed. I watched him flatline twice before they got him stable. When he woke up I told him I couldn't take it anymore nor would I watch or play a hand in his death & when he gets clean come find me & walked out. He's around & about. He doesn't know I still keep tabs on him but I haven't spoke him since that day.
This hits all to close to home for me. Up til about 6 months ago I done alot of the same things & then some for my brother. No matter how dangerous the place, the people or what it time it was. I'd go get him sober him up & wait for the time. I got the phone a little after 2 a.m. that he overdosed. I watched him flatline twice before they got him stable. When he woke up I told him I couldn't take it anymore nor would I watch or play a hand in his death & when he gets clean come find me & walked out. He's around & about. He doesn't know I still keep tabs on him but I haven't spoke him since that day.
6/24/2012 c13 Loveforgreeneyes
Wow. Not what I expected at all. Thanks for sharing something that has a real life consequence.
Wow. Not what I expected at all. Thanks for sharing something that has a real life consequence.
6/11/2012 c13 SillyJilly123
Such a tragic but real story. I like that this was like you said, a "sketch" or outline. Still very good and holds a lot of meaning.
Such a tragic but real story. I like that this was like you said, a "sketch" or outline. Still very good and holds a lot of meaning.
4/26/2012 c13 cutealy
Thanks again for outlining another fact of life which not everyone can overcome. It is such a pity that this occurs every day everywhere. Innocent people die and the dealers and pushers make money in such a horrid way. Awareness is always the key to keep them safe...xx
Thanks again for outlining another fact of life which not everyone can overcome. It is such a pity that this occurs every day everywhere. Innocent people die and the dealers and pushers make money in such a horrid way. Awareness is always the key to keep them safe...xx
1/28/2012 c13 olivedaisychain
i was hoping they would make it, but the ending is probably more realistic. well done.
i was hoping they would make it, but the ending is probably more realistic. well done.
1/27/2012 c13 3062301
Damn! Me being the optimist I am, I thought at the door would be a healthy Edward & Bella!
Damn! Me being the optimist I am, I thought at the door would be a healthy Edward & Bella!
12/28/2011 c13 1littlelizruth
ah i had a feeling. but they went together at least. and they were clean for a while. poor kids.
ah i had a feeling. but they went together at least. and they were clean for a while. poor kids.