for Help of a Seer1/8 c14 mumphie
I am enjoying your story immensely. Wondering why Harry hasn't had Remus as part of their group. I'm sure he could be shown how the Headmaster hasn't used the best judgement with many people and situations. Or not, if you have him being a sycophant who won't see reason. But since you have him helping a newly turned she wolf, maybe he is too busy!
I am enjoying your story immensely. Wondering why Harry hasn't had Remus as part of their group. I'm sure he could be shown how the Headmaster hasn't used the best judgement with many people and situations. Or not, if you have him being a sycophant who won't see reason. But since you have him helping a newly turned she wolf, maybe he is too busy!
1/8 c7 mumphie
One of those things you mentioned that slipped passed because of this chapter not having a beta- "...and as I a result..."
One of those things you mentioned that slipped passed because of this chapter not having a beta- "...and as I a result..."
1/8 c6 mumphie
"...Luna used her free arm to feel really her boyfriend..." - Did you accidently switch words? Did you mean - to really feel?
"...Luna used her free arm to feel really her boyfriend..." - Did you accidently switch words? Did you mean - to really feel?
1/8 c5 mumphie
Sorry - a bit of grammar here...(can't help it, really!) ;)
You wrote - "...you must trust Harry and I..." It should be Harry and me. Think of separating it out. You must trust Harry. You must trust me. You wouldn't say, you must trust I. So, you say - You must trust Harry and me. Sometimes it's okay to use the word - me.
Sorry - a bit of grammar here...(can't help it, really!) ;)
You wrote - "...you must trust Harry and I..." It should be Harry and me. Think of separating it out. You must trust Harry. You must trust me. You wouldn't say, you must trust I. So, you say - You must trust Harry and me. Sometimes it's okay to use the word - me.
1/8 c4 mumphie
Hhmmm...traveling through the trees...is that where legends of dryads come from? I can imagine someone taking their constitutional through the woods, and a young woman steps out of it. Quite shocking! :)
Hhmmm...traveling through the trees...is that where legends of dryads come from? I can imagine someone taking their constitutional through the woods, and a young woman steps out of it. Quite shocking! :)
6/5/2024 c26 csheila
An a absolutely wonderful tale.
Well written, plotted, and sourced. Don’t let anyone bully you over it
An a absolutely wonderful tale.
Well written, plotted, and sourced. Don’t let anyone bully you over it
6/5/2024 c20 csheila
It would have been easier to kill Dumbles
Poor security not to gave searched area for disillusionment
It would have been easier to kill Dumbles
Poor security not to gave searched area for disillusionment