for Help of a Seer11/11/2018 c5 Guest
Great
Great
11/10/2018 c4 Guest
Good great
Good great
11/9/2018 c3 Guest
Good
Good
8/10/2018 c17 Abbey Riddle
Fantastic story! However, these "kids" are killing death eaters left and right (which has been great, some stories aren't always practical) but they got upset and threatened to ask Charlie to leave because he swore a couple times? They don't want the kids to pick up the bad habit? They are teenagers who have spent most of their impressionable years at a boarding school! Half of them are having sex...but the swearing is where the Grangers draw their hard line? Quite preposterous.
Fantastic story! However, these "kids" are killing death eaters left and right (which has been great, some stories aren't always practical) but they got upset and threatened to ask Charlie to leave because he swore a couple times? They don't want the kids to pick up the bad habit? They are teenagers who have spent most of their impressionable years at a boarding school! Half of them are having sex...but the swearing is where the Grangers draw their hard line? Quite preposterous.
8/7/2018 c26 chc91776
Truly enjoyed most of this story.. I just feel it went a little Granger heavy. I mean you even named a school after them lol...
epilogue was a bit lacking but still glad there was one to shore things up,,
Truly enjoyed most of this story.. I just feel it went a little Granger heavy. I mean you even named a school after them lol...
epilogue was a bit lacking but still glad there was one to shore things up,,
8/7/2018 c18 chc91776
I really enjoy this story but you push the Grangers being the end all be all too much it gets annoying..
I really enjoy this story but you push the Grangers being the end all be all too much it gets annoying..
8/7/2018 c17 chc91776
Big issue with tis chapter... I understand why you have the Grangers being parental figures to to be excessive to the point of correcting a curse word not wanting the kids to pick it up the fuck are they 3? other than that excellent chapter
Big issue with tis chapter... I understand why you have the Grangers being parental figures to to be excessive to the point of correcting a curse word not wanting the kids to pick it up the fuck are they 3? other than that excellent chapter
7/25/2018 c26 ossifiedtotem
This had so many neat ideas, and avoided most of the really bad cliches.
It was quite a breath of fresh air, honestly.
I've not seen a seer quite as accurate as Luna was, or this method of killing Voldemort. Hell, I've not even seen Dumbles neutralized like that before.
It was a delightful read, and thank you very much for taking the time to write such an excellent fic.
This had so many neat ideas, and avoided most of the really bad cliches.
It was quite a breath of fresh air, honestly.
I've not seen a seer quite as accurate as Luna was, or this method of killing Voldemort. Hell, I've not even seen Dumbles neutralized like that before.
It was a delightful read, and thank you very much for taking the time to write such an excellent fic.
7/25/2018 c7 ossifiedtotem
"As I understand the seer's gift, that can only happen if Luna Lovegood no longer exists."
"Once you become both his and lost."
I'm just guessing, but Luna Lovegood will no longer exist because Luna Potter will. And that will be 'becoming his' as well.
How she gets lost I've no idea, though.
This has been a great read so far, thanks very much for writing it.
"As I understand the seer's gift, that can only happen if Luna Lovegood no longer exists."
"Once you become both his and lost."
I'm just guessing, but Luna Lovegood will no longer exist because Luna Potter will. And that will be 'becoming his' as well.
How she gets lost I've no idea, though.
This has been a great read so far, thanks very much for writing it.
6/2/2018 c7 Aftermath Man
So your author's note creates issues for me and suspension of disbelief van only go so far depending on set up, Neville is a wonderful character but he has no relation to the black family in any way that is canon. Only Harry, now that Draco is dead can hold that title, in total part thanks to his grandmother Dorea Potter-Black. I am having serious difficulty rectifying your extreme departure form canon in such a way and am unsure if I can continue, which upsets me greatly as you have created something truly wondrous, with one of my favorite pairings. Good luck on your future endeavours.
So your author's note creates issues for me and suspension of disbelief van only go so far depending on set up, Neville is a wonderful character but he has no relation to the black family in any way that is canon. Only Harry, now that Draco is dead can hold that title, in total part thanks to his grandmother Dorea Potter-Black. I am having serious difficulty rectifying your extreme departure form canon in such a way and am unsure if I can continue, which upsets me greatly as you have created something truly wondrous, with one of my favorite pairings. Good luck on your future endeavours.
5/20/2018 c26 Warthogs anag
Thank you for writing this story. I have enjoyed reading it as much the second time as I did the first.
Thank you for writing this story. I have enjoyed reading it as much the second time as I did the first.
4/17/2018 c2 antim1santhrope
im trying to read this but the dumbledore hate is so unrealistic... i fine with dumbledore bashing... I've read plenty of fanfics with a dumbledore bashing... but you can't jump so far off cannon so fast when you are using cannon background...in cannon Harry hero Worships. Dumbledore. you have to start the bashing slow or have your own short recap of books 1-5 of Harry not liking DDore
im trying to read this but the dumbledore hate is so unrealistic... i fine with dumbledore bashing... I've read plenty of fanfics with a dumbledore bashing... but you can't jump so far off cannon so fast when you are using cannon background...in cannon Harry hero Worships. Dumbledore. you have to start the bashing slow or have your own short recap of books 1-5 of Harry not liking DDore
22/19/2018 c8 Guest
Good
Good