for Help of a Seer3/2/2014 c2 
2Specky Clarke
A really entrancing and unusual start to a fanfic. I think I am going to love this story.
2Specky ClarkeA really entrancing and unusual start to a fanfic. I think I am going to love this story.
3/1/2014 c26 12Banner
I spent the last couple of days reading this story - I've been entranced. The characterizations and their interactions are just beautiful. The way Harry managed to dispose of Dumbledore was brilliant.
Thank you.
12BannerI spent the last couple of days reading this story - I've been entranced. The characterizations and their interactions are just beautiful. The way Harry managed to dispose of Dumbledore was brilliant.
Thank you.
2/17/2014 c26 1Indecisive Bob
Great story! Some things were... questionable in their plausibility, but hey, it's fanfiction; you're entitled to some creative modification (even if it's on accident). Thank you for taking the time to write this story!
1Indecisive BobGreat story! Some things were... questionable in their plausibility, but hey, it's fanfiction; you're entitled to some creative modification (even if it's on accident). Thank you for taking the time to write this story!
2/7/2014 c10 Navn Ukjent
Nice story so far.
I do wonder why they would have to use a cap and ball pistol? There are MANY people that load their own ammo for a wide range of modern and older weapons. It's easy to reload brass cartridges with the right equipment.
It should also be quite easy to gain some long range weapons if they were willing to find a black market dealer or traveled to Eastern Europe or another continent. This was after the fall of the eastern block and the Soviet Union, and getting "surplus" guns would be easy.
Nice story so far.
I do wonder why they would have to use a cap and ball pistol? There are MANY people that load their own ammo for a wide range of modern and older weapons. It's easy to reload brass cartridges with the right equipment.
It should also be quite easy to gain some long range weapons if they were willing to find a black market dealer or traveled to Eastern Europe or another continent. This was after the fall of the eastern block and the Soviet Union, and getting "surplus" guns would be easy.
1/11/2014 c26 Andy
I hated the first three chapters. They were slow and didn't add much to the story. Having said that, the rest of it was great! I loved the ending. (I have an account, I am lios Itachi. I'm just to lazy to sign in. That and I can't find my password. Eventually my wife will find it lecture me about keeping my memory in her head.)
I hated the first three chapters. They were slow and didn't add much to the story. Having said that, the rest of it was great! I loved the ending. (I have an account, I am lios Itachi. I'm just to lazy to sign in. That and I can't find my password. Eventually my wife will find it lecture me about keeping my memory in her head.)
12/1/2013 c10 richardrobinsonjr
A while back I was researching Silver Bullets and found that most modern guns either can't fire them safely without a lot of work and some can't fire them at all. However a cap and ball pistol can, relatively easily and the bullets can be made much more easily and cheaply as the author found it cost over two hundred dollars (US) to make each one while the balls cost lest than $50. A normal cap and ball pistol can fire them with minimal changes, if any, while modern cartridge pistols had to have specially made parts . This amounted to over $500 minimum to fire the silver safely and some pistols were estimated to cost in the thousands of dollars to retool.
One other note, this assumed firing more than 3 Silver bullets as problems appeared rapidly but not neccesarily on the first one or two.
Richard Robinson
A while back I was researching Silver Bullets and found that most modern guns either can't fire them safely without a lot of work and some can't fire them at all. However a cap and ball pistol can, relatively easily and the bullets can be made much more easily and cheaply as the author found it cost over two hundred dollars (US) to make each one while the balls cost lest than $50. A normal cap and ball pistol can fire them with minimal changes, if any, while modern cartridge pistols had to have specially made parts . This amounted to over $500 minimum to fire the silver safely and some pistols were estimated to cost in the thousands of dollars to retool.
One other note, this assumed firing more than 3 Silver bullets as problems appeared rapidly but not neccesarily on the first one or two.
Richard Robinson
10/31/2013 c14 3dot
Oh my god. An amazing HP/LL story delivered in such a believable manner, and without the oh my gawd sex time is so good and natural smut bs. I have no idea why this isn't at least 2000 fav's higher. Although I guess the length might have contributed, but nevertheless, all the characters feel right in this story. And while major characters killing regularly might seem a hard pill to swallow, you made the process and after effects and necessities quite natural.
Oh my god. An amazing HP/LL story delivered in such a believable manner, and without the oh my gawd sex time is so good and natural smut bs. I have no idea why this isn't at least 2000 fav's higher. Although I guess the length might have contributed, but nevertheless, all the characters feel right in this story. And while major characters killing regularly might seem a hard pill to swallow, you made the process and after effects and necessities quite natural.
10/28/2013 c26 Gracealma
Lovely story filled with action, love, challenged, and getting rid of the evil people.
Lovely story filled with action, love, challenged, and getting rid of the evil people.
10/21/2013 c16 1at-nightfall
why is Hannah pregnant?
rape would indicate an abortion if necessary, to make sure there is no child.
1at-nightfallwhy is Hannah pregnant?
rape would indicate an abortion if necessary, to make sure there is no child.
10/21/2013 c12 at-nightfall
syringes should be easily available. They can be bought in each apothecary. The Grangers being dentists should know suppliers who can sell them syringes by the 1000 with less than half a week of notice.
syringes should be easily available. They can be bought in each apothecary. The Grangers being dentists should know suppliers who can sell them syringes by the 1000 with less than half a week of notice.
10/21/2013 c11 at-nightfall
In the UK a shotgun is much more easily available than a handgun. (limited to three shots)
Here in Germany a hunting rifle is easier to come by than a hand gun. The rifle would have to be either single shot, or limited to three/five shots before reloading.
Reloading casings by yourself is a big no in Europe, and even more limited than guns, as it gives access to bomb building material.
Black powder based revolvers or guns might be the easiest access to self build ammunition, as you only need a fireworks license in addition to a gun license.
Regards
In the UK a shotgun is much more easily available than a handgun. (limited to three shots)
Here in Germany a hunting rifle is easier to come by than a hand gun. The rifle would have to be either single shot, or limited to three/five shots before reloading.
Reloading casings by yourself is a big no in Europe, and even more limited than guns, as it gives access to bomb building material.
Black powder based revolvers or guns might be the easiest access to self build ammunition, as you only need a fireworks license in addition to a gun license.
Regards
10/16/2013 c26 Guest
Thanks this story was interesting and well thought out!
Thanks this story was interesting and well thought out!
9/3/2013 c18 Pedohater
Umm are you aware of that the two pairings you are setting up is rather mismatched? I can see what you are trying to do, calling Bill and Charlie young adults, but fact remains that Charlie graduated from Hogwarts before the others even were "firsties" making him to be at a minimum in his mid twenties and Bill in his mid to late twenties. How many in that age do you know to be chasing after schoolgirls that are 16-17 years old? In canon, there's even a rather large age gap between Bill and Fleur, and she is 3 years Hermiones and Daphnes senior...
Umm are you aware of that the two pairings you are setting up is rather mismatched? I can see what you are trying to do, calling Bill and Charlie young adults, but fact remains that Charlie graduated from Hogwarts before the others even were "firsties" making him to be at a minimum in his mid twenties and Bill in his mid to late twenties. How many in that age do you know to be chasing after schoolgirls that are 16-17 years old? In canon, there's even a rather large age gap between Bill and Fleur, and she is 3 years Hermiones and Daphnes senior...