for Help of a Seer11/4/2012 c26 Iamcarollee
Really enjoyed the story.
Really enjoyed the story.
11/1/2012 c26 Bladre MKT
well this has been a good trip, not too long but long enough to be fun! and quite the series. a lil of a simple dead for lil old tom, but thats war for you, not as flashy as it sold... still, awesome. also i LOVE those fic where harry is important, but not the 'main', so thanks in that!
all in all, an great fic!
well this has been a good trip, not too long but long enough to be fun! and quite the series. a lil of a simple dead for lil old tom, but thats war for you, not as flashy as it sold... still, awesome. also i LOVE those fic where harry is important, but not the 'main', so thanks in that!
all in all, an great fic!
10/29/2012 c26 true blue brit
I really loved this story, particularly the seriously cute ending. I could just see Harry and Luna together like this. Will you be writing a follow-up? Britney
I really loved this story, particularly the seriously cute ending. I could just see Harry and Luna together like this. Will you be writing a follow-up? Britney
10/28/2012 c12 Bgbg
Well this story has its flaws, here are a couple of the more extreme ones:
1. If seers are this stupidly powerful why aren't they ruling the world? Or at the very least why doesn't everyone have one? You really need to think things through when you make changes to a world. Completely overpowering a certain class of people and expecting everything else in society to be exactly the same is not very intelligent.
2. You're having outnumbered schoolchildren go up against trained killers a huge number of times with zero casualties every time, and you don't seem to find that implausible. Speaking of implausible, having the same schoolchildren go kill off an insanely powerful dark wizard many decades their senior in his own warded fortress is so improbable it's bordering on naivety. And to top it off their whole plan to save the world is to kill him several more times without him catching on.
3. I am shocked and appalled that you would deny abortion to a rape victim. I am even more shocked when you go out of your way to imply that a health care professional demanding a patient stay in agony for three days, rather than allowing her to have an abortion is in the right. Please keep such sick opinions out of your stories.
Also, most of your dialogues need work, they read more like an exposition than how people actually talk.
Well this story has its flaws, here are a couple of the more extreme ones:
1. If seers are this stupidly powerful why aren't they ruling the world? Or at the very least why doesn't everyone have one? You really need to think things through when you make changes to a world. Completely overpowering a certain class of people and expecting everything else in society to be exactly the same is not very intelligent.
2. You're having outnumbered schoolchildren go up against trained killers a huge number of times with zero casualties every time, and you don't seem to find that implausible. Speaking of implausible, having the same schoolchildren go kill off an insanely powerful dark wizard many decades their senior in his own warded fortress is so improbable it's bordering on naivety. And to top it off their whole plan to save the world is to kill him several more times without him catching on.
3. I am shocked and appalled that you would deny abortion to a rape victim. I am even more shocked when you go out of your way to imply that a health care professional demanding a patient stay in agony for three days, rather than allowing her to have an abortion is in the right. Please keep such sick opinions out of your stories.
Also, most of your dialogues need work, they read more like an exposition than how people actually talk.
10/24/2012 c26 
7jaythekoala
Fantastic story. I loved the pace of the plot and the tought that clearly went into it. Well done.
7jaythekoalaFantastic story. I loved the pace of the plot and the tought that clearly went into it. Well done.
10/17/2012 c26 mekareami
Thank you for a most enjoyable story. Well written with characters that I really bonded with. I look forward to reading more of your work. Tyvm for writing
Thank you for a most enjoyable story. Well written with characters that I really bonded with. I look forward to reading more of your work. Tyvm for writing
10/17/2012 c12 Bladre MKT
are hermione and daphne hooking up or not?! for real, everybody in the fic seemsto think so!...
are hermione and daphne hooking up or not?! for real, everybody in the fic seemsto think so!...
10/16/2012 c7 Bladre MKT
actually, i didnt ever read that part of the lexicon... in fact, neville wins the titl over harry since his black family memeber was the grandmother, harrys was the greatgrandmother. draco its the first in line as he is the son of a black, then neville, then harry... interesting... this is fic-changing! im sooooo PM-ing this to some friends!
actually, i didnt ever read that part of the lexicon... in fact, neville wins the titl over harry since his black family memeber was the grandmother, harrys was the greatgrandmother. draco its the first in line as he is the son of a black, then neville, then harry... interesting... this is fic-changing! im sooooo PM-ing this to some friends!
10/16/2012 c3 Bladre MKT
an interesting way to deal with it, stating that the soul fragment of the horcruz its encased in a magic shell. nver have though about it quite like that...
an interesting way to deal with it, stating that the soul fragment of the horcruz its encased in a magic shell. nver have though about it quite like that...
10/16/2012 c2 Bladre MKT
i can almost see that last scene in my mind, sound like an interesting travel...
i can almost see that last scene in my mind, sound like an interesting travel...
10/12/2012 c7 Sibling Creature
"The head of Noble and Most Ancient houses is determined by the convoluted laws of inheritance only. So cousin Sirius could not designate that honor."
This seems an odd usage of the word inheritance which I would not consider to necessarily indicate a familial tie. (eg if Sirius willed his estate to say Hermione, that would still be inheritance) I think a more appropriate term in this case would be heredity.
- SC
"The head of Noble and Most Ancient houses is determined by the convoluted laws of inheritance only. So cousin Sirius could not designate that honor."
This seems an odd usage of the word inheritance which I would not consider to necessarily indicate a familial tie. (eg if Sirius willed his estate to say Hermione, that would still be inheritance) I think a more appropriate term in this case would be heredity.
- SC