for Help of a Seer6/16/2012 c17 
48shiro-wolfman-k
Well, so many revelations here, I enjoyed greatly the interactions with the goblins. And well, Hermione quietly found her pair, at least in an intelectual level. But I still wonder what happened to Fleur, I guess she didn't get to know Bill all that well in this world, and didn't make the changes on to her career choices to get to know him better.
About Daphne and Charlie, I guess it's more of a matter of pride than attraction there. Of course they could be attraction but they seems to be too prideful to work in the end.
48shiro-wolfman-kWell, so many revelations here, I enjoyed greatly the interactions with the goblins. And well, Hermione quietly found her pair, at least in an intelectual level. But I still wonder what happened to Fleur, I guess she didn't get to know Bill all that well in this world, and didn't make the changes on to her career choices to get to know him better.
About Daphne and Charlie, I guess it's more of a matter of pride than attraction there. Of course they could be attraction but they seems to be too prideful to work in the end.
6/16/2012 c16 shiro-wolfman-k
You know, Its harder for me to get accustomed to Severus new persona, really. But I can stand it.
So I guess that Luna's training is soon to begin with, especially with the grandmother of Greg? I do remember an old lady beside him and Bullstrode.
Still, thank you for the story.
You know, Its harder for me to get accustomed to Severus new persona, really. But I can stand it.
So I guess that Luna's training is soon to begin with, especially with the grandmother of Greg? I do remember an old lady beside him and Bullstrode.
Still, thank you for the story.
6/16/2012 c15 shiro-wolfman-k
You know, I was expecting a lot of more deaths, but it seems that it wasn't to be. Now, I am getting tired of Bones, but well, she is doing her job so I can't blame her for that.
You know, I always wondered what magical propierties had that particular stone that could absorb a supposedly unstoppable curse? it is hard to cast or conjure it? Because no body except Dumbledore seemed to know how to do it in canon.
Thank you for the story.
You know, I was expecting a lot of more deaths, but it seems that it wasn't to be. Now, I am getting tired of Bones, but well, she is doing her job so I can't blame her for that.
You know, I always wondered what magical propierties had that particular stone that could absorb a supposedly unstoppable curse? it is hard to cast or conjure it? Because no body except Dumbledore seemed to know how to do it in canon.
Thank you for the story.
6/16/2012 c14 shiro-wolfman-k
Finally, I am reading again so they finally gave each other to their curiosity, I was wondering when that would happen.
Thank you for the story.
Finally, I am reading again so they finally gave each other to their curiosity, I was wondering when that would happen.
Thank you for the story.
6/14/2012 c13 shiro-wolfman-k
Its been a while isnt it? I was expecting you to publish a new chapter, but after a long time I didn't see more. I began to research, and what did I find? You had already completed the story.
Well, what can I say, it was an interesting chapter, kind filler, but not in a bad sense, its fills you with information about whats coming, so it's not all that bad.
I am a little tired right now, but let's see how much I can read before sleeps claim me.
Its been a while isnt it? I was expecting you to publish a new chapter, but after a long time I didn't see more. I began to research, and what did I find? You had already completed the story.
Well, what can I say, it was an interesting chapter, kind filler, but not in a bad sense, its fills you with information about whats coming, so it's not all that bad.
I am a little tired right now, but let's see how much I can read before sleeps claim me.
6/2/2012 c7 bobcox26
This story had a great chance of being a wonderful story of Harry/Hermione/Luna but for so reason you chose not to go that way and hurt the story a lot 1. the relationship between H/L happen way to fast from firend to lover.2. Harry never even thinks of Hermione durning this time( he has a 5 year relationship with and has all his trust plus when Harry saw her at the ball he strated to see her as more then a firend)3. Hermione does n ot trust Dumblefore or any teacher that blindly since 2 or 3 year to much has happen for her not question all of this4. If Hermione was going to do something like this she would have done it already and loss Harry friendship.
I know the story is done but I felt the need to speak out these are just a few reason that I dispointed in this story so for I mean you have Harry worry over and helping that had done him wrong before even thiking of H
This story had a great chance of being a wonderful story of Harry/Hermione/Luna but for so reason you chose not to go that way and hurt the story a lot 1. the relationship between H/L happen way to fast from firend to lover.2. Harry never even thinks of Hermione durning this time( he has a 5 year relationship with and has all his trust plus when Harry saw her at the ball he strated to see her as more then a firend)3. Hermione does n ot trust Dumblefore or any teacher that blindly since 2 or 3 year to much has happen for her not question all of this4. If Hermione was going to do something like this she would have done it already and loss Harry friendship.
I know the story is done but I felt the need to speak out these are just a few reason that I dispointed in this story so for I mean you have Harry worry over and helping that had done him wrong before even thiking of H
6/2/2012 c6 bobcox26
This story had a great chance of being a wonderful story of Harry/Hermione/Luna but for so reason you chose not to go that way and hurt the story a lot 1. the relationship between H/L happen way to fast from firend to lover.2. Harry never even thinks of Hermione durning this time( he has a 5 year relationship with and has all his trust plus when Harry saw her at the ball he strated to see her as more then a firend)3. Hermione does n ot trust Dumblefore or any teacher that blindly since 2 or 3 year to much has happen for her not question all of this4. If Hermione was going to do something like this she would have done it already and loss Harry friendship.
I know the story is done but I felt the need to speak out these are just a few reason that I dispointed in this story so for I mean you have Harry worry over and helping that had done him wrong before even thinking of Hermione
This story had a great chance of being a wonderful story of Harry/Hermione/Luna but for so reason you chose not to go that way and hurt the story a lot 1. the relationship between H/L happen way to fast from firend to lover.2. Harry never even thinks of Hermione durning this time( he has a 5 year relationship with and has all his trust plus when Harry saw her at the ball he strated to see her as more then a firend)3. Hermione does n ot trust Dumblefore or any teacher that blindly since 2 or 3 year to much has happen for her not question all of this4. If Hermione was going to do something like this she would have done it already and loss Harry friendship.
I know the story is done but I felt the need to speak out these are just a few reason that I dispointed in this story so for I mean you have Harry worry over and helping that had done him wrong before even thinking of Hermione
5/27/2012 c26 1Lord Sia
Oh, happy ending! As in, a real, "Here this Saga ends and a New One begins" end, not a "And you'll never know what was really happening, nyeh-nyeh!" end.
I hate those kinds of ends.
Ahem. Have a cookie.
1Lord SiaOh, happy ending! As in, a real, "Here this Saga ends and a New One begins" end, not a "And you'll never know what was really happening, nyeh-nyeh!" end.
I hate those kinds of ends.
Ahem. Have a cookie.
5/9/2012 c26 17MSgt SilverDollar and Snake
Great story. I liked the way you handled Dumbledork and got rid of Luna's seeing ability although I hated that she had to suffer the dementors. I was surprised that JKR never addressed the child abuse issue with the Dursleys and Dumbledork.
17MSgt SilverDollar and SnakeGreat story. I liked the way you handled Dumbledork and got rid of Luna's seeing ability although I hated that she had to suffer the dementors. I was surprised that JKR never addressed the child abuse issue with the Dursleys and Dumbledork.
5/8/2012 c26 ElijahWinter
Warning: this review WILL contain spoilers. If you are one of those people who read the reviews to make sure a story is good then avoid mine for spoilers and just accept that it is worth the read.
Soooo good. That was a great story. I loved that Dumbledore lost his magic, and the whole 'trick' he fell for. Pure awesomeness.
I also loved the ending, particularly the last two lines:
The changes needed to make to the world better are in place, now we just need for the people to catch up so the changes feel like they aren't changes, but the way it should be."
"I'll help," little Jenny piped up. "I can help make it all be good."
Little Jenny actually made me tear up a bit. One thing I wasn't quite sure about...Luna lost her seer abilities right?
Definitely a story I would recommend to others. Can't wait for more of your stories if they are as good as this one.
Warning: this review WILL contain spoilers. If you are one of those people who read the reviews to make sure a story is good then avoid mine for spoilers and just accept that it is worth the read.
Soooo good. That was a great story. I loved that Dumbledore lost his magic, and the whole 'trick' he fell for. Pure awesomeness.
I also loved the ending, particularly the last two lines:
The changes needed to make to the world better are in place, now we just need for the people to catch up so the changes feel like they aren't changes, but the way it should be."
"I'll help," little Jenny piped up. "I can help make it all be good."
Little Jenny actually made me tear up a bit. One thing I wasn't quite sure about...Luna lost her seer abilities right?
Definitely a story I would recommend to others. Can't wait for more of your stories if they are as good as this one.
5/7/2012 c7 ElijahWinter
I know so little of canon...having only read the first three books myself...so wasn't put out or even particularly surprised by Neville being head of Black. I mean the Purebloods are so intermingled that it wouldn't have surprised me if even one of the Weasley's or the Granger's had been the heir. But the explanation, as simple and straightforward as it was, helped lift any doubts or concerns I might ever have had.
Back to more reading.
I know so little of canon...having only read the first three books myself...so wasn't put out or even particularly surprised by Neville being head of Black. I mean the Purebloods are so intermingled that it wouldn't have surprised me if even one of the Weasley's or the Granger's had been the heir. But the explanation, as simple and straightforward as it was, helped lift any doubts or concerns I might ever have had.
Back to more reading.
5/5/2012 c26 1Araytigre
This story was a lot of fun, I liked how you set the dynamics for the "clan" that Harry and Luna made. I also found it interesting that you mainly used Harry/Luna and Hermione with the three Slytherins (Blaise, Tracey, and Daphne), with a smattering of other students (Neville, Susan, and Hannah to name a few), whereas Ron and Ginny didn't make the cut so to speak. Your versions of Severus Snape and Narcissa Malfoy/Black and their reformations was excellent (Snape is not bad, he's just misunderstood), and bringing Percy back into the Weasley family fold was good too. The other "ships" that you developed worked really well. That, and it was fun to see Dumbledore and his "Greater Good" brought down the way that you did. Thank You. TTFN
1AraytigreThis story was a lot of fun, I liked how you set the dynamics for the "clan" that Harry and Luna made. I also found it interesting that you mainly used Harry/Luna and Hermione with the three Slytherins (Blaise, Tracey, and Daphne), with a smattering of other students (Neville, Susan, and Hannah to name a few), whereas Ron and Ginny didn't make the cut so to speak. Your versions of Severus Snape and Narcissa Malfoy/Black and their reformations was excellent (Snape is not bad, he's just misunderstood), and bringing Percy back into the Weasley family fold was good too. The other "ships" that you developed worked really well. That, and it was fun to see Dumbledore and his "Greater Good" brought down the way that you did. Thank You. TTFN
5/4/2012 c26 sunsethill
Several RL things conspired to keep me from finishing this story when you wrote it, so I loaded it on my Kindle and finally got around to the last few chapters. I greatly enjoyed it, as I did all the rest of the story. I actually expected much more angst and bad things to happen to everyone and was quite happy at the level of action at the end. It was fun seeing a competent minister operate, I loved the way that Harry maneuvered Dumbledore, and I loved that Severus got to be a hero and was as uncomfortable as Harry at his new status. And you actually had Harry and company do something about the state of the wizarding world so that the crapilogue didn't occur. I can't wait to see what you write next.
Several RL things conspired to keep me from finishing this story when you wrote it, so I loaded it on my Kindle and finally got around to the last few chapters. I greatly enjoyed it, as I did all the rest of the story. I actually expected much more angst and bad things to happen to everyone and was quite happy at the level of action at the end. It was fun seeing a competent minister operate, I loved the way that Harry maneuvered Dumbledore, and I loved that Severus got to be a hero and was as uncomfortable as Harry at his new status. And you actually had Harry and company do something about the state of the wizarding world so that the crapilogue didn't occur. I can't wait to see what you write next.
4/30/2012 c25 5rdg2000
I LOVE IT! It should have happened to Dumbledore a long time ago.
Thanks for a very enjoyable story.
rdgale
5rdg2000I LOVE IT! It should have happened to Dumbledore a long time ago.
Thanks for a very enjoyable story.
rdgale
4/30/2012 c12 rdg2000
So even after Luna tells Madam Bones that both she and Susan will die if she run for Minister she's going to do it anyway?
It sounded like she wouldn't earlier, Maybe I misread.
Interesting story. Lots of unexpected items.
Thanks for sharing.
rdgale
So even after Luna tells Madam Bones that both she and Susan will die if she run for Minister she's going to do it anyway?
It sounded like she wouldn't earlier, Maybe I misread.
Interesting story. Lots of unexpected items.
Thanks for sharing.
rdgale