for Help of a Seer5/27/2022 c26 FriendlyFire59
A very well thought out idea for the storyline. I liked the revenge on Dumbles
A very well thought out idea for the storyline. I liked the revenge on Dumbles
5/15/2022 c26 MSanderlin
Thank you for a Good Story. I enjoyed the world you built.
Thank you for a Good Story. I enjoyed the world you built.
4/7/2022 c1 
23Lerris
Sorry, once Hannah began pregnant with the rapist child despite them stopping the rapist, Luna being a seer, and everything magical that should have been able to prevent conception from even occurring..
Can't read more. Should be warning.
23LerrisSorry, once Hannah began pregnant with the rapist child despite them stopping the rapist, Luna being a seer, and everything magical that should have been able to prevent conception from even occurring..
Can't read more. Should be warning.
4/7/2022 c12 Lerris
The pregnancy bit was the absolute most jarring this entire story for the least reason. They stopped her rape, likely before he got that far, and while that is not a guarantee, well, in the harry potter world summoning things is easy, vanishing things is easy, but summoning what may have been left is, somehow, not? Yah, I don't buy it. They got her to healers within what minutes?
The pregnancy bit was the absolute most jarring this entire story for the least reason. They stopped her rape, likely before he got that far, and while that is not a guarantee, well, in the harry potter world summoning things is easy, vanishing things is easy, but summoning what may have been left is, somehow, not? Yah, I don't buy it. They got her to healers within what minutes?
3/30/2022 c26 1Darknessdawns
This was a fascinating story and the first I have read where Luna has such a major role. I absolutely loved it from beginning to end. I especially liked the druid magic that became part of the story and really wish there had been more done with it. I quite like the idea of Harry shifting into different forms and can see many uses for them, especially his grim form with it's advanced sense of smell and hearing. Tis a pity they couldn't communicate with similar animals while in those forms. At any rate you did wonderfully with the combat and training scenes. I also really enjoyed the character development and the planning. Honestly I'm not sure if the lose of Luna's sight is a bad thing or not. I guess that really depends on if it's viewed as a gift or a curse since it's a bit of both. Either way it had to be better for her emotional state to not have to worry about it. Anyway the ending of Voldemort and Dumbledore were both well done and enjoyable. So thank you for taking the time to write and share this. I definitely enjoyed it.
1DarknessdawnsThis was a fascinating story and the first I have read where Luna has such a major role. I absolutely loved it from beginning to end. I especially liked the druid magic that became part of the story and really wish there had been more done with it. I quite like the idea of Harry shifting into different forms and can see many uses for them, especially his grim form with it's advanced sense of smell and hearing. Tis a pity they couldn't communicate with similar animals while in those forms. At any rate you did wonderfully with the combat and training scenes. I also really enjoyed the character development and the planning. Honestly I'm not sure if the lose of Luna's sight is a bad thing or not. I guess that really depends on if it's viewed as a gift or a curse since it's a bit of both. Either way it had to be better for her emotional state to not have to worry about it. Anyway the ending of Voldemort and Dumbledore were both well done and enjoyable. So thank you for taking the time to write and share this. I definitely enjoyed it.
12/12/2021 c3 Guest
It's nice to read a story with Seer Luna. It would probably read better with women if you add another dozen references to the fact that Luna is an anatomically correct female.
It's nice to read a story with Seer Luna. It would probably read better with women if you add another dozen references to the fact that Luna is an anatomically correct female.
12/7/2021 c26 Gina
Thanks.
Thanks.
12/6/2021 c22 Gina
wow, what a cliffhanger! I'm glad the story has a couple more chapters posted, I don't think I'd have nails left otherwise.
Great story!
wow, what a cliffhanger! I'm glad the story has a couple more chapters posted, I don't think I'd have nails left otherwise.
Great story!
12/5/2021 c7 Gina
I like Neville being Head of the Black family. Sirus blood adopts Harry in some of the other stories and that's how he gets away with it.
I like Neville being Head of the Black family. Sirus blood adopts Harry in some of the other stories and that's how he gets away with it.
10/27/2021 c24 3Steve-Arkarian
I know Harry had to marry Luna by proxy, but they seem like the kind of couple and he seems like the kind of guy that after she wakes up or comes back or whatever, that he would eventually propose properly even though they're already married and then offer her a real wedding. I hope that happens.
3Steve-ArkarianI know Harry had to marry Luna by proxy, but they seem like the kind of couple and he seems like the kind of guy that after she wakes up or comes back or whatever, that he would eventually propose properly even though they're already married and then offer her a real wedding. I hope that happens.
10/27/2021 c22 Steve-Arkarian
Why doesn't anyone else know how to make a clock like at the Weasley's?
Why doesn't anyone else know how to make a clock like at the Weasley's?
10/27/2021 c21 Steve-Arkarian
I wonder what, if anything, the arch at the Reserve would do to/possibly for werewolves.
I wonder what, if anything, the arch at the Reserve would do to/possibly for werewolves.