for Those Three Words Change Everything5/4/2016 c1 Guest
Hello
Hello
12/30/2015 c1 katie davies
this is great please right more! xx
this is great please right more! xx
6/21/2015 c1 Guest
I love this story, love to have a lover him.
I love this story, love to have a lover him.
1/11/2014 c1 Guest
Ew bitch u suk
Ew bitch u suk
10/11/2013 c1 harry styles
love this story, wish it was real... lou isnt into me tho
love this story, wish it was real... lou isnt into me tho
10/3/2013 c1 
2KellyLovesR5
Oh my god! Loooooved it! The ending was so cute! And Louis and his girlish troubles were just... alshakalvsan *Leroy voice* PER-FECT.
2KellyLovesR5Oh my god! Loooooved it! The ending was so cute! And Louis and his girlish troubles were just... alshakalvsan *Leroy voice* PER-FECT.
8/4/2013 c1 e.crystall
Wooow, this was just soooo ! I'm at a loss of words right now, sorry if I'm not too coherent, besides I'm still nose bleeding xD This is great, marvelous, so sweet, and soft, and gentle and innocent and yet so deep, so profound and intense, it's a merely magnificent story, the way you write drives me crazy, it's just insane, I can't believe the effect this had on me. Brilliant work, I really wish you would write some more similar stories XD ... *laughs insanely due to an overwhelming perversion attack*
Wooow, this was just soooo ! I'm at a loss of words right now, sorry if I'm not too coherent, besides I'm still nose bleeding xD This is great, marvelous, so sweet, and soft, and gentle and innocent and yet so deep, so profound and intense, it's a merely magnificent story, the way you write drives me crazy, it's just insane, I can't believe the effect this had on me. Brilliant work, I really wish you would write some more similar stories XD ... *laughs insanely due to an overwhelming perversion attack*
4/2/2013 c1 Casey
Girl I love it! As weird as I sound haha. It was really good!
Girl I love it! As weird as I sound haha. It was really good!
3/31/2013 c1 Chloe
That is really good...it would be weird if it really happened though... Lol
That is really good...it would be weird if it really happened though... Lol
3/17/2013 c1 3dragon fier 20
Hahaahahhahaha awesome! I loved it bunches! It was amazing, and I hope you make more stories like this!
3dragon fier 20Hahaahahhahaha awesome! I loved it bunches! It was amazing, and I hope you make more stories like this!
2/17/2013 c1 Lisha
It's a little bit pervert but I like it :D
It's a little bit pervert but I like it :D
1/16/2013 c1 IZ
One critique of you fanfic: subject-verb agreement. Learn it bitch.
One critique of you fanfic: subject-verb agreement. Learn it bitch.
8/31/2012 c1 currentlyunknown123
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Please note that the guidelines clearly state that stories containing real people are not allowed here. If you want to keep your story as is, you can do a Google search for places that allow this type of content and move this story there. OneDirectionFanfiction, LiveJournal, or a blog are just a few places you could try. Or, if you want to keep it on fanfiction, you can change the names so they're no longer confused with real people.
If you decide to leave it here without changing it, your story will be reported for breaking the rules and it may be deleted.
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