for Those Three Words Change Everything8/30/2012 c1 Guest
That was fucking amaizing
That was fucking amaizing
8/15/2012 c1 Jess
It was really great. I think you should take a shot at writing out that interview! It'd be interesting, that's for sure.
It was really great. I think you should take a shot at writing out that interview! It'd be interesting, that's for sure.
8/13/2012 c1 secret
You should have gave details after the pulled him into the bedroom thing
You should have gave details after the pulled him into the bedroom thing
8/3/2012 c1 Guest
LOVE IT! U SHOULD RITE MORE STORIED LIKE THIS ONE! IT WAS AMAZING!
LOVE IT! U SHOULD RITE MORE STORIED LIKE THIS ONE! IT WAS AMAZING!
7/20/2012 c1 
1amerieLynn
Overall, it was okay.
If you're planning on making more fanfics that are somewhat like this, try to describe the sex scenes in more detail. And try writing from an omniscent POV.
I know this is a oneshot, but coming out only one week later is too fast don't you think?
Anyways, keep on writing!
1amerieLynnOverall, it was okay.
If you're planning on making more fanfics that are somewhat like this, try to describe the sex scenes in more detail. And try writing from an omniscent POV.
I know this is a oneshot, but coming out only one week later is too fast don't you think?
Anyways, keep on writing!
6/18/2012 c1 61a kiss of winter
OH. MY. GAWD.
-tackle hugs you-
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Write more Larry smut!
*FAVORITES LISTER!*
61a kiss of winterOH. MY. GAWD.
-tackle hugs you-
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Write more Larry smut!
*FAVORITES LISTER!*
5/20/2012 c1 5Eva Cormac
well.
That was really good, so sweet :)
but nonetheless is one word, sweetheart!
5Eva Cormacwell.
That was really good, so sweet :)
but nonetheless is one word, sweetheart!
4/6/2012 c1 Guest
Loved it! Do more 1D! Maybe Ziam or Ziall? xxx
Loved it! Do more 1D! Maybe Ziam or Ziall? xxx
2/27/2012 c1 YeahIt'sMeGotAProblem
, sorry, but you know how much I lobve gay guys, especially hot gay guys, and gay guys making out, OMG gay emo guys making out, man i'm getting horny haha. Yeah Jordan, I fucking love it, it's like a lot of gayness and I love gayness, me, myself and I aen't gay but homeophobia is like the shittest phobia in the fucking world, why the fuck would you be scared of gay people especially gay guys, gay emo guys espec, especially. Ahhh my phone keeps vibrating, but it's not him :( oh sorry sort of off topic there anyway, yeah mate, do another fucking one shot, with gay emo guys just for me? you could make it multi-chapte if you want ;)
Luvvvvsssss u bby 4ev@
chyeah boii, chav talk for the win :D haha
bye
love you
see you around sometime
lots of love
Moi xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
, sorry, but you know how much I lobve gay guys, especially hot gay guys, and gay guys making out, OMG gay emo guys making out, man i'm getting horny haha. Yeah Jordan, I fucking love it, it's like a lot of gayness and I love gayness, me, myself and I aen't gay but homeophobia is like the shittest phobia in the fucking world, why the fuck would you be scared of gay people especially gay guys, gay emo guys espec, especially. Ahhh my phone keeps vibrating, but it's not him :( oh sorry sort of off topic there anyway, yeah mate, do another fucking one shot, with gay emo guys just for me? you could make it multi-chapte if you want ;)
Luvvvvsssss u bby 4ev@
chyeah boii, chav talk for the win :D haha
bye
love you
see you around sometime
lots of love
Moi xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
1/30/2012 c1 Guest
Omg I love this :D Its so cute,can you do another chapter? :)
Omg I love this :D Its so cute,can you do another chapter? :)
12/26/2011 c1 Idamariie
Aww! I just discovered Harry/Louis and I'm all for it. Thank you for writing this story. It's slightly different from the stories I read, but I liked it.
Aww! I just discovered Harry/Louis and I'm all for it. Thank you for writing this story. It's slightly different from the stories I read, but I liked it.