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for My Milaya Lemon Outtake for Chapter 24

2/5/2016 c1 Roza95
Good scene
9/6/2015 c1 alexlc
Good one. ;)
9/2/2014 c2 1VAGypsy
That is a fantastic lemon for your 1st! Well written!
I love this story and hope you do come back this month to complete it!
8/31/2014 c2 Jennifer Matthews
Flippin love it! 1st lemon?! Really?! Crazy good! This whole story is one of my favs that i have read on here ! It is soooo good! I cant wait for the updates! Welcm back and congrats on everything u have overcome! Very inspirational! Amazing job and cant wait to read ur book!
6/15/2014 c2 RoBiNiSmYbOo
I AM SO PROUD THAT YOU OVERCAME EVERYTHING AND BECAME AN AUTHOR! I can't wait until you start up with the story again and I'll be reading your book! Hey, maybe it'll get its own fandom!
11/10/2012 c1 Mdnight
LIAR! You said this was your first lemon! It's so fucking good. I love it!1
4/1/2012 c1 Maravillosa Eres Tu
hahaha i love it, it is so good!
3/11/2012 c1 1Ranim
great chapter :)
1/25/2012 c1 Anonymous
Nothing to be nervous about. It's far better than others I've read from writers who have been at it for a lot longer. Delicious!
1/9/2012 c1 TwilightLove21
I can't believe I barely read this outtake :O lol! I think u did a great job!
12/19/2011 c1 Willa
Two Words:

EPIC and AMAZING!

(love the ending sentence)
11/25/2011 c1 ladora
This was really good! You portrayed the right amount of love and lust; it was romantic and erotic but not pornographic.

I do have to say I busted out laughing pretty hard when I read the phrase "massive peen". I don't know why but even trying to write about it now makes me laugh. There is a lack of sexy words to describe the male appendage, in my opinion, though Comrade Jr. is a pretty good nickname, lol.
11/16/2011 c1 Megpie93
Wow! I like it.
11/16/2011 c1 Dimka's chick
Omg! This has got to be one of the hottest lemons I have ever read. Fuck! So damn hot! Time for a cold shower. That was exactly how I pictured and hoped their first time would be.
11/15/2011 c1 1sunnie-scripts
haha, that was so awkward but so good, keep it up that was awesome :D
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