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11/27/2011 c1 3Veni0Vidi0Vici
So very sorry to tell you this, but having three or more lines of script format is against the rules of FanFiction.Net.

Please reformat your script into prose or remove it.

Thank you for your time.

~Veni, Spiderstar of LawlClan

~Order of the Concritters~
11/22/2011 c3 Priceless Cat Lady
Good so far!

Priceless, ;D

P.S. I like your little conversations at the top and bottom! They're really funny.
11/21/2011 c3 37Shadowclanwarrior
LOL at the Author's Note! Good chapter.
11/16/2011 c2 Priceless Cat Lady
Your writing is pretty good and your plot has promise. I will be back as soon as I possibly can; (that might not be very soon) and I willnexpect to see you going somewhere with this. ;D

11/16/2011 c2 Shadowclanwarrior
Very interesting story. Very curious to see what happens next.
11/16/2011 c2 12lunaaltare
Oh wow! Lightpaw is such a beautiful name! :3 oh, and I think Emberstar is a very kind person, so is Sunflower and I can't say very much about the apprentices since they had just arrived in the story, also grrrr to Ratheart and Proudclaw! They were so mean to Lightpaw! And poor Lightpaw, she doesn't even know where she is! :_C
11/15/2011 c1 2Dawn-of-the-Wolf
Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssseeeeee !

*ahem* please ignore that random spasm...

Anywayz, I really like the names of your cats for some reason :-) Apart from Russetface. That's just weird. :-P
11/15/2011 c1 12lunaaltare
Wow! Amazing! Hope for more from you!

-Huggles from Kittu

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