for The Right Choice9/20/2016 c1 Emmeline
This is lovely! Could you do a prequel to show the events leading up to it? I would like to see their relationship development.
This is lovely! Could you do a prequel to show the events leading up to it? I would like to see their relationship development.
6/20/2014 c1 Guest
MORE!
MORE!
12/24/2012 c1 Guest
ERLACK PLEASE UPDATE! LOVE THIS 3
ERLACK PLEASE UPDATE! LOVE THIS 3
6/5/2012 c1 
3ellentheonlyone
I LOVE the story! And I feel so sorry for Murtagh and Nasuada with their little baby problem. And he doesn't even know about it! Poor lovely Murtagh 3
Please write more on this story I cant wait to read more / ellen
3ellentheonlyoneI LOVE the story! And I feel so sorry for Murtagh and Nasuada with their little baby problem. And he doesn't even know about it! Poor lovely Murtagh 3
Please write more on this story I cant wait to read more / ellen
3/1/2012 c1 Lily
Love it! It's a pity you haven't contiue writting NEXT CHAPTER! :)
Love it! It's a pity you haven't contiue writting NEXT CHAPTER! :)
1/9/2012 c1 Sylvia
I love it! I finished the book two days ago and I was very sad none of the couples end together (except for Roran and Katrina, of course). I can't wait to read more of this story, please keep writing!
I love it! I finished the book two days ago and I was very sad none of the couples end together (except for Roran and Katrina, of course). I can't wait to read more of this story, please keep writing!
1/4/2012 c1 17kitcatkandy
awesome! i hope you include a scene when murtagh and nasuada meet, and she tells him of her pregnancy.
17kitcatkandyawesome! i hope you include a scene when murtagh and nasuada meet, and she tells him of her pregnancy.
12/14/2011 c1 3Tomyallen
That was well done. Sure it was short but all the better for your readers. It means they will be more inclined to come back if they felt there is much more to be read. Your grammar is really good as well and I found only a few mistakes.
I finished reading inheritance 2 day after its release in Canada. And wow I loved it. Was so Happy the Paolini finally published. I didn't much enjoy the ending with thought as I was cheering for Arya and Eragon. I hope that if a branch of the story is written (maybe on a murtagh perspective) that Arya and Eragon will get their chance.
Please post the next chapter thought! I'm really excited to see how you write this story!
3TomyallenThat was well done. Sure it was short but all the better for your readers. It means they will be more inclined to come back if they felt there is much more to be read. Your grammar is really good as well and I found only a few mistakes.
I finished reading inheritance 2 day after its release in Canada. And wow I loved it. Was so Happy the Paolini finally published. I didn't much enjoy the ending with thought as I was cheering for Arya and Eragon. I hope that if a branch of the story is written (maybe on a murtagh perspective) that Arya and Eragon will get their chance.
Please post the next chapter thought! I'm really excited to see how you write this story!
12/4/2011 c1 3ShadowedB
Story sounds like it will be rather interesting...will be watching for further updates..
*still seething over CP's aweful ending to Mur/Nas*
3ShadowedBStory sounds like it will be rather interesting...will be watching for further updates..
*still seething over CP's aweful ending to Mur/Nas*
11/28/2011 c1 sarah
awww i love the way you wrote it, but i think it needed more of a build up. of course, if there was more (hint hint)i could re evaluate that opnion... (shameless bribery)
awww i love the way you wrote it, but i think it needed more of a build up. of course, if there was more (hint hint)i could re evaluate that opnion... (shameless bribery)
11/18/2011 c1 NoOne
I love it! Please keep writing :)
I love it! Please keep writing :)
11/17/2011 c1 3FlyingHighDefyingGravity
I love this idea. Personally, I can't wait for Murtagh to come into the picture. He is by far my favorite character. I love Jormundur's reaction as well. I can't wait for the next chapter.
3FlyingHighDefyingGravityI love this idea. Personally, I can't wait for Murtagh to come into the picture. He is by far my favorite character. I love Jormundur's reaction as well. I can't wait for the next chapter.