for The True Inheritance, or Eld Hljödhr abr Wyrda6/17 c1 
2Merhada
I’m a fan of tje original ending but I love this version to, and its weitten so well, or at least better then most of the fanfics.
2MerhadaI’m a fan of tje original ending but I love this version to, and its weitten so well, or at least better then most of the fanfics.
5/9 c1 koushik
nice spin to the fan fiction
nice spin to the fan fiction
4/25 c1 Nobody659
I cannot thank you enough for ending this series properly. Ive waited more than 10 years for a proper ending. Thank you so much for this
I cannot thank you enough for ending this series properly. Ive waited more than 10 years for a proper ending. Thank you so much for this
8/30/2023 c1 Jbru
This is first fanfic I’ve ever read, so I can honestly say its the best I have read. I do not see how someone can top this. I am sad that all the other fan fics I find are following CPs ending and not this. This alternate universe is the one I wish the upcoming show would follow. If anyone knows of a sequel or something similar please let me know!
This is first fanfic I’ve ever read, so I can honestly say its the best I have read. I do not see how someone can top this. I am sad that all the other fan fics I find are following CPs ending and not this. This alternate universe is the one I wish the upcoming show would follow. If anyone knows of a sequel or something similar please let me know!
8/30/2023 c11 Jbru
This was very satisfying to read. I am thankful you took the time to write this. Much more of the ending we deserved and that made sense in accordance to the characters we have grown the love. Arya would of never become queen and I am thankful their time didnt end with a wave of the hand lol.
I am curious why you thought the Urgal olympics was not worth carrying over to this story?
I plan to print this out and bind it to give as a gift to some friends who enjoy eragon as well.
10/10 awesome!
This was very satisfying to read. I am thankful you took the time to write this. Much more of the ending we deserved and that made sense in accordance to the characters we have grown the love. Arya would of never become queen and I am thankful their time didnt end with a wave of the hand lol.
I am curious why you thought the Urgal olympics was not worth carrying over to this story?
I plan to print this out and bind it to give as a gift to some friends who enjoy eragon as well.
10/10 awesome!
11/7/2022 c7 Guest
Loved it. I do wish that Arya told dragon her true name first. I thought in the canon that was a very big moment for Arya to be willing to open up. Besides that finally Arya and enraging woot woot!
Loved it. I do wish that Arya told dragon her true name first. I thought in the canon that was a very big moment for Arya to be willing to open up. Besides that finally Arya and enraging woot woot!
10/6/2022 c4 Guest
wow...angela is brave! and demanding
wow...angela is brave! and demanding
4/27/2022 c11 OutcastDragon
Thanks for this great alternative ending to the inheritance cycle, I enjoyed it very much !
Thanks for this great alternative ending to the inheritance cycle, I enjoyed it very much !
11/24/2021 c12 SpeedReaderM
I think you just changed my head cannon for this series. I feel like the original ending was more like an angsty fanfic and this was the proper ending.
Also Angela's prophecy about leaving only means that when Eragon does eventually die, it will be outside of Alagaesia. There is no clause on the number of trips away and back prior to the final one. If anything it means that as long as Eragon is in Alagaesia he won't die.
"Good."
Lol, thanks for the perfect ending.
I think you just changed my head cannon for this series. I feel like the original ending was more like an angsty fanfic and this was the proper ending.
Also Angela's prophecy about leaving only means that when Eragon does eventually die, it will be outside of Alagaesia. There is no clause on the number of trips away and back prior to the final one. If anything it means that as long as Eragon is in Alagaesia he won't die.
"Good."
Lol, thanks for the perfect ending.
8/29/2021 c12 Kaisssn
Fantastic re-work of the ending! Paolini’s original ending was one that happens in reality(and reality often times sucks). This is a fictional world, so it should also have a fictional ending!(meaning it SHOULD NOT suck). And you have done exactly that, it was a happy ending, everyone was happy:) Trulg well done, oh Author-of-my-mind-and-heart ;)
Fantastic re-work of the ending! Paolini’s original ending was one that happens in reality(and reality often times sucks). This is a fictional world, so it should also have a fictional ending!(meaning it SHOULD NOT suck). And you have done exactly that, it was a happy ending, everyone was happy:) Trulg well done, oh Author-of-my-mind-and-heart ;)
8/29/2021 c6 Kaoalana
900th review boi!
900th review boi!
8/29/2021 c3 Hushsvs
This is genuinely better than the original ending, well done!
This is genuinely better than the original ending, well done!
8/10/2021 c1 the continuity of ducks
This was an incredibly fitting ending, and I’m glad I managed to stumble across it despite the many years it’s been since you made it. Thank you for helping to set our imaginations at rest, given how restless they’ve been since this series ended(although I suppose his new book gives a tiny bit more closure, but not enough)
This was an incredibly fitting ending, and I’m glad I managed to stumble across it despite the many years it’s been since you made it. Thank you for helping to set our imaginations at rest, given how restless they’ve been since this series ended(although I suppose his new book gives a tiny bit more closure, but not enough)