for Shadowfall11/20/2011 c2 LordofGalaxies
im wondering when eragon will come into the story? cant wait to read more and good job on this chapter, plz update as soon as possible.
im wondering when eragon will come into the story? cant wait to read more and good job on this chapter, plz update as soon as possible.
11/20/2011 c1 AlistairReuyter
So far, so good =)
Nice, quality beginning, long chapter, good in-character behaviour, obviously though through... keep this up and I think you will make a great post-Inheritance story in time. So far, best one here, but its still kinda early. Waiting for other chapter to see where this goes.
So far, so good =)
Nice, quality beginning, long chapter, good in-character behaviour, obviously though through... keep this up and I think you will make a great post-Inheritance story in time. So far, best one here, but its still kinda early. Waiting for other chapter to see where this goes.
11/18/2011 c1 Arrows the Wolf
WHAT IS WITH ALL THESE CLIFFIES IN THIS SECTION OF FAN FICTION? It's a really good story by the way, I like it. :)
WHAT IS WITH ALL THESE CLIFFIES IN THIS SECTION OF FAN FICTION? It's a really good story by the way, I like it. :)
11/18/2011 c1 
8Restrained.Freedom
Interesting... XD
It is so early to say, but this sounds quite interesting indeed...
R&K little rider...
Message of a coming threat...
M with a beard?... *cringe*
Oh well... Great start... Write on!
8Restrained.FreedomInteresting... XD
It is so early to say, but this sounds quite interesting indeed...
R&K little rider...
Message of a coming threat...
M with a beard?... *cringe*
Oh well... Great start... Write on!
11/17/2011 c1 2IronMikeTyson
I like this very much. Keep it up. It is probably the best post INheritance Arya I have ever seen; she isn't thinking and crying over Eragon like most people have her do.
2IronMikeTysonI like this very much. Keep it up. It is probably the best post INheritance Arya I have ever seen; she isn't thinking and crying over Eragon like most people have her do.
11/17/2011 c1 AmorAeterna
This sounds like it has huge potential! Can't wait for more updates. Can I hope to see ExA?
This sounds like it has huge potential! Can't wait for more updates. Can I hope to see ExA?
11/17/2011 c1 1.2.3.4
I loved it! Please upload soon!
I loved it! Please upload soon!
11/17/2011 c1 LordofGalaxies
good first chapter and it seems like it will be a good story. i cantt wait to read more so plz update as soon as possible.
good first chapter and it seems like it will be a good story. i cantt wait to read more so plz update as soon as possible.
11/17/2011 c1 notarealperson
I know u just started but plz update soon
I know u just started but plz update soon