
8/20/2015 c1
10The Brother Anton
Aw, Mori, no...it's so sad, but it's so accurate. He'd definitely think this in the canon. Great work.

Aw, Mori, no...it's so sad, but it's so accurate. He'd definitely think this in the canon. Great work.
1/4/2012 c1
87Wild Rhov
I liked it, but I think you meant "sliver of light" and "sliver of hope" rather than "slimmer" (which mean being skinny)

I liked it, but I think you meant "sliver of light" and "sliver of hope" rather than "slimmer" (which mean being skinny)
11/18/2011 c1 Lady Tsuru27
Very sad, and very nicely done. I feel so sorry for poor Tetsuhiro! :( You summed it up well; your poem captures a lot of emotion in just a few words, which makes them have more of an impact, in my humble opinion.
Very sad, and very nicely done. I feel so sorry for poor Tetsuhiro! :( You summed it up well; your poem captures a lot of emotion in just a few words, which makes them have more of an impact, in my humble opinion.
11/18/2011 c1
3Imamonster12
Ahwwww Love it :D
Please carry on with more stuff :D
I can understand completely what Morinaga is getting at, with his emotions, very well done ^w^

Ahwwww Love it :D
Please carry on with more stuff :D
I can understand completely what Morinaga is getting at, with his emotions, very well done ^w^