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8/20/2015 c1 10The Brother Anton
Aw, Mori, no...it's so sad, but it's so accurate. He'd definitely think this in the canon. Great work.
1/4/2012 c1 87Wild Rhov
I liked it, but I think you meant "sliver of light" and "sliver of hope" rather than "slimmer" (which mean being skinny)
11/18/2011 c1 crismar
wonderful!
11/18/2011 c1 Lady Tsuru27
Very sad, and very nicely done. I feel so sorry for poor Tetsuhiro! :( You summed it up well; your poem captures a lot of emotion in just a few words, which makes them have more of an impact, in my humble opinion.
11/18/2011 c1 3Imamonster12
Ahwwww Love it :D

Please carry on with more stuff :D

I can understand completely what Morinaga is getting at, with his emotions, very well done ^w^
11/18/2011 c1 54FanFic Fabricator
^^ I could see him thinking this too. Nice job-love it.

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