for Soon3/15/2012 c1 ZooeyD
I was supposed to read it a day you posted this story. And I wrote that on comments at Lion and Lamb LJ.
You captured Edward's character in every way.
I read it while listening to Bella Reborn from Breaking Dawn Part 1 score.
I have only one word to say to you as a whole review for this.
Beautiful/Amazing.
I was supposed to read it a day you posted this story. And I wrote that on comments at Lion and Lamb LJ.
You captured Edward's character in every way.
I read it while listening to Bella Reborn from Breaking Dawn Part 1 score.
I have only one word to say to you as a whole review for this.
Beautiful/Amazing.
11/20/2011 c1 
15callistana
Oh, this is lovely! I haven't seen the film yet, so reading Breaking Dawn-era fic is the perfect way to stave off the temptation to watch the millions of clips of the movie that are floating around on the internet! Anyway, I absolutely loved this journey into our favourite vampire's mind. :)
15callistanaOh, this is lovely! I haven't seen the film yet, so reading Breaking Dawn-era fic is the perfect way to stave off the temptation to watch the millions of clips of the movie that are floating around on the internet! Anyway, I absolutely loved this journey into our favourite vampire's mind. :)
11/18/2011 c1 4BernieR
Bravo! Loved it girl! Helped me relive that part of the movie all over again! :)
Very anxious to see it again :)
4BernieRBravo! Loved it girl! Helped me relive that part of the movie all over again! :)
Very anxious to see it again :)
11/18/2011 c1 laurafc1107
That was beautifully written! I love that you write so many missing scenes or just little scenes from the books in your own way. These are my favourite stories to read on ff!
That was beautifully written! I love that you write so many missing scenes or just little scenes from the books in your own way. These are my favourite stories to read on ff!
11/18/2011 c1 Ksenia
It's so wonderful reading this bit after just having watched breaking dawn)))Very accurate description of his emotions!
It's so wonderful reading this bit after just having watched breaking dawn)))Very accurate description of his emotions!
11/18/2011 c1 2Cullark98girl
This is beautiful! You are a very good writer and I really like the story
2Cullark98girlThis is beautiful! You are a very good writer and I really like the story