for The Keepsake2/22 c20 ellencu
I very much enjoyed this story. It was a HEA, so that’s a good start. This one was such a different path, with Edward losing his memories and his mind-reading ability. The more-relaxed Edward was fun. Thank you for writing!
I very much enjoyed this story. It was a HEA, so that’s a good start. This one was such a different path, with Edward losing his memories and his mind-reading ability. The more-relaxed Edward was fun. Thank you for writing!
2/15 c20 HarassedFluff
So much more satisfying than the original books: both E&B grew, developed and formed a partnership that is far more respectful and aspirational than written by SM. This should be required reading with the originals for all impressionable youngsters. I loved it so much!
So much more satisfying than the original books: both E&B grew, developed and formed a partnership that is far more respectful and aspirational than written by SM. This should be required reading with the originals for all impressionable youngsters. I loved it so much!
2/8 c20 WordsMusicMagic
wow, Wow, WOW! I can't believe I missed this one 10 years ago. This story was perfection. Seriously, it was poignant, sweet, sexy, and had some of the best character development I've ever read. I don't know if you even read reviews anymore but this is in my top 10 and I've read 100's of fics! No disrespect meant to the great Stephenie Meyer who made this world for us to play with, but THIS fic was better than the original. I loved that Bella and Edward had actually grown and learned from their mistakes. I loved that Bella had to really see and understand what kind of a decision she was making and how it would affect others. I could go on and on, but yeah. Just... Mmmmmwwaahhhhh!
wow, Wow, WOW! I can't believe I missed this one 10 years ago. This story was perfection. Seriously, it was poignant, sweet, sexy, and had some of the best character development I've ever read. I don't know if you even read reviews anymore but this is in my top 10 and I've read 100's of fics! No disrespect meant to the great Stephenie Meyer who made this world for us to play with, but THIS fic was better than the original. I loved that Bella and Edward had actually grown and learned from their mistakes. I loved that Bella had to really see and understand what kind of a decision she was making and how it would affect others. I could go on and on, but yeah. Just... Mmmmmwwaahhhhh!
2/2 c20 Guest
They should have taken pics of Renee and Alex, even video. Hope they have food for her.
They should have taken pics of Renee and Alex, even video. Hope they have food for her.
1/29 c20 cocotinha.rk
Essa foi com certeza uma das melhores fics que ja li. Voce acertou em cada detalhe e eu estou tao feliz de ter encontrado essa preciosidade! Obrigada por essa linda história e por esse epílogo lindo!
Essa foi com certeza uma das melhores fics que ja li. Voce acertou em cada detalhe e eu estou tao feliz de ter encontrado essa preciosidade! Obrigada por essa linda história e por esse epílogo lindo!
12/26/2024 c1 
1jenejes
omg! i know i had started reading this back in the day, but i must not have finished. this was sooooo good! i love reading stories where they are allowed to mature in their time apart. thank you so muuch cor writing this fic!
1jenejesomg! i know i had started reading this back in the day, but i must not have finished. this was sooooo good! i love reading stories where they are allowed to mature in their time apart. thank you so muuch cor writing this fic!
10/18/2024 c19 rachelke86
You have an amazing talent. Your characters come alive, and write Canon ExB so much better dan SM herself. After reading stories like this, it’s oblivious how flawed SM writing/characters are.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful stories and I hope to enjoy many more in the future ️
You have an amazing talent. Your characters come alive, and write Canon ExB so much better dan SM herself. After reading stories like this, it’s oblivious how flawed SM writing/characters are.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful stories and I hope to enjoy many more in the future ️
9/4/2024 c20 EndlessGloaming
This has been such a great story. Thank you for putting in the work to create it and then sharing it with us all.
This has been such a great story. Thank you for putting in the work to create it and then sharing it with us all.
6/28/2024 c19 Olivia G
OK, the fact that I read this whole fanfiction in 2 days says everything. There's no words in the dictionary to describe it. It's more like a book than anything, or in other words it's absolutely gorgeous. The plot and type of writing is stunning and the way it links to the original twilight is chefs kiss!
I know you probably don't have your account anymore, it has been 10 years since you wrote this, but the message needs to be out is amazing. As I said in the first review, you could be a real author!
I just want to say we'll done and congrats to you and Melanie :)
Thanks for an awesome read,
Olivia.
OK, the fact that I read this whole fanfiction in 2 days says everything. There's no words in the dictionary to describe it. It's more like a book than anything, or in other words it's absolutely gorgeous. The plot and type of writing is stunning and the way it links to the original twilight is chefs kiss!
I know you probably don't have your account anymore, it has been 10 years since you wrote this, but the message needs to be out is amazing. As I said in the first review, you could be a real author!
I just want to say we'll done and congrats to you and Melanie :)
Thanks for an awesome read,
Olivia.
6/26/2024 c2 Guest
OK how was the second chapter better than the first? I have no words, that's how good this is!
OK how was the second chapter better than the first? I have no words, that's how good this is!
6/26/2024 c1 Olivia G
This is literally the best fanfiction I've ever read. It has the same feel of the original twilight but yet somehow fricking different. Really good plot and writing... You could be a real author :)
This is literally the best fanfiction I've ever read. It has the same feel of the original twilight but yet somehow fricking different. Really good plot and writing... You could be a real author :)