for The Keepsake11/9/2018 c20 Alyce
I've only discovered this just now, Nov 2018 but my oh my I absolutely loooved it! *_*
I loved when B&E were getting to know each other, I loved that you kept with the original story & characters
Thank you so much for finishing this fic! I never wanted to end.. (just like with the books) but I love the cute ending they get :)
There were things how Edward and Bella thought of themselves back in Forks that didn't match with what I think, but everyone has a different view & opinion about things (otherwise why so many people hate or love Twilight? haha) and I really love how you expressed that. And I loooove the mixed attitude after Edward regains his memory.
Amazing job! Oh and I loved the long chapters
I've only discovered this just now, Nov 2018 but my oh my I absolutely loooved it! *_*
I loved when B&E were getting to know each other, I loved that you kept with the original story & characters
Thank you so much for finishing this fic! I never wanted to end.. (just like with the books) but I love the cute ending they get :)
There were things how Edward and Bella thought of themselves back in Forks that didn't match with what I think, but everyone has a different view & opinion about things (otherwise why so many people hate or love Twilight? haha) and I really love how you expressed that. And I loooove the mixed attitude after Edward regains his memory.
Amazing job! Oh and I loved the long chapters
11/7/2018 c20 Guest
Okay, this isn’t what I was expecting at all. But I loved it! It’s really different, I haven’t read anything like it before, but I loved your Edward and I loved this story!
Okay, this isn’t what I was expecting at all. But I loved it! It’s really different, I haven’t read anything like it before, but I loved your Edward and I loved this story!
10/30/2018 c3 sue1zide
I had to laugh at the Monster Mash moment because as I'm reading this chapter it's October 31, 2018.
I had to laugh at the Monster Mash moment because as I'm reading this chapter it's October 31, 2018.
10/22/2018 c20 Guest
good story. but somethings were really annoying.
good story. but somethings were really annoying.
9/27/2018 c20 Guest
Absolutely love your take on the story. Your writing is incredible. I love how they both matured and grew not only together but as individuals. Love it so much!
Absolutely love your take on the story. Your writing is incredible. I love how they both matured and grew not only together but as individuals. Love it so much!
9/18/2018 c14 Guest
You have made these 2 annoying. Just changed everything about the book and made it seem like it was something it was not and you are trying to make it into what you think it should have been but in the process you've made them annoying as fuck.
You have made these 2 annoying. Just changed everything about the book and made it seem like it was something it was not and you are trying to make it into what you think it should have been but in the process you've made them annoying as fuck.
9/18/2018 c4 
20whilewewereyetsinners
You know, it doesn’t matter how many times I read this, or even that I know it’s coming, when he says “Birthday” and she says “Gone” I cry every time. Even though she’s doing reasonably well he left such damage in his wake, and you capture it so well in just one word.
20whilewewereyetsinnersYou know, it doesn’t matter how many times I read this, or even that I know it’s coming, when he says “Birthday” and she says “Gone” I cry every time. Even though she’s doing reasonably well he left such damage in his wake, and you capture it so well in just one word.
9/13/2018 c20 sarae32
Wow! All I can say is thank you. Some stories you never can feel a completion with but yours was perfect! You took me on a whole new journey that I didn’t want to end, but there is a wonderful peace now thanks to this one. Wonderfully written and I love where you took us on this journey.
Wow! All I can say is thank you. Some stories you never can feel a completion with but yours was perfect! You took me on a whole new journey that I didn’t want to end, but there is a wonderful peace now thanks to this one. Wonderfully written and I love where you took us on this journey.
9/11/2018 c7 Guest
How very lovely that you are making the Edward he was before, not a great person. That's what is being implied. It's so lovely.
How very lovely that you are making the Edward he was before, not a great person. That's what is being implied. It's so lovely.
7/31/2018 c20 Kageyjay
Very interesting changes. It makes a platform that ultimately gets them to a better place: they both grow up, and Bella makes more informed choices, making her a better vampire. The baby is a nice touch. I've always liked Edward using Masen as his last name. I've always thought that Bella should have become Bella Masen Cullen. I'm glad they made their new family the Masen clan.
Very interesting changes. It makes a platform that ultimately gets them to a better place: they both grow up, and Bella makes more informed choices, making her a better vampire. The baby is a nice touch. I've always liked Edward using Masen as his last name. I've always thought that Bella should have become Bella Masen Cullen. I'm glad they made their new family the Masen clan.
7/12/2018 c20 Guest
Just, the best Edward. The best. The character arc you’ve given him is so much more rewarding than the original series. They’re evolution from young infatuation to complex adult love is a joy to read and something the source material could have benefited greatly from. Well done.
Just, the best Edward. The best. The character arc you’ve given him is so much more rewarding than the original series. They’re evolution from young infatuation to complex adult love is a joy to read and something the source material could have benefited greatly from. Well done.