for Bella's Secret Life11/18/2017 c3 Amber Cheney
This story is absolutely ridiculous. You just have to read further to see what other crazy things you come up with.
This story is absolutely ridiculous. You just have to read further to see what other crazy things you come up with.
11/18/2017 c2 Amber Cheney
Is English your second language? If, indeed, it is I won't harp on your problem with the right tense usage. I still like your story. It's not at all believable, but it's comic relief.
Is English your second language? If, indeed, it is I won't harp on your problem with the right tense usage. I still like your story. It's not at all believable, but it's comic relief.
11/18/2017 c1 Amber Cheney
So far, I like this story and I will keep reading. The only problem I have, is the grammar. You need to change the word seen into saw in 4 or 5 places. That would clean up so much.
So far, I like this story and I will keep reading. The only problem I have, is the grammar. You need to change the word seen into saw in 4 or 5 places. That would clean up so much.
4/28/2014 c25 Guest
Nice
Nice
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