for Bella's Secret Life4/13/2014 c1 Guest
This story has an excellent premise. You have an excellent imagination. However, the story is riddled with grammatical errors word misuse. Below are two examples:
Runway module S/B model
calm down S/B calmed down
I sincerely hope you get or got a Beta. In the meantime, I am continuing to read as the plot is intriguing.
Sincerely,
LanaLee1 (I am not logged into the website at this time.)
This story has an excellent premise. You have an excellent imagination. However, the story is riddled with grammatical errors word misuse. Below are two examples:
Runway module S/B model
calm down S/B calmed down
I sincerely hope you get or got a Beta. In the meantime, I am continuing to read as the plot is intriguing.
Sincerely,
LanaLee1 (I am not logged into the website at this time.)
4/7/2014 c14 
15Kiara Bella Cullen
I think there should be a shot out. Jacob and Tayna start shooting and have Jasper and emmet shot back. It is great
15Kiara Bella CullenI think there should be a shot out. Jacob and Tayna start shooting and have Jasper and emmet shot back. It is great
4/4/2014 c10 cheysma2000
Busted! You would think those idiots would have been smart enough to stay out of school that day. I think Bella is going to get her man soon. :)
Busted! You would think those idiots would have been smart enough to stay out of school that day. I think Bella is going to get her man soon. :)
4/4/2014 c9 cheysma2000
I love it when Charlie acts like a daddy. To many times fictions act like he is barely around or cares about Bella but I think he would be like a grown up version of Emmett, a big old soft teddy bear on the inside.
I love it when Charlie acts like a daddy. To many times fictions act like he is barely around or cares about Bella but I think he would be like a grown up version of Emmett, a big old soft teddy bear on the inside.