
6/6/2012 c7
6Crimson-Hybrid
Ah, yet another story to be added to my collection of only the most well-written DMC pieces.
In all honesty, this is really good! I've read all the chapters so far, and this story does not disappoint, especially in the suspense department. Every word flowed nicely from one point to the other, and it kept me on the edge of my seat!
While I read this, I can imagine the scene come to life in my mind with vivid detail, all thanks to the way you wrote them.
I cannot wait for more, and hopefully, the rumors of you abandoning this are not true.
With regards,
-Crimson

Ah, yet another story to be added to my collection of only the most well-written DMC pieces.
In all honesty, this is really good! I've read all the chapters so far, and this story does not disappoint, especially in the suspense department. Every word flowed nicely from one point to the other, and it kept me on the edge of my seat!
While I read this, I can imagine the scene come to life in my mind with vivid detail, all thanks to the way you wrote them.
I cannot wait for more, and hopefully, the rumors of you abandoning this are not true.
With regards,
-Crimson
2/17/2012 c7 jennyya
pretty good chapter, very descriptive that´s pretty cool, when you think it can´t get any better,it does, now i´m more intrigued than ever! I don´t know if it was a long chapter, perhaps you could make them longer and add more conversations, find the balance between conversations and narrative, though they´re excellent anyway, you're a pretty awsome writer, hope you don't take too long to update. :)
pretty good chapter, very descriptive that´s pretty cool, when you think it can´t get any better,it does, now i´m more intrigued than ever! I don´t know if it was a long chapter, perhaps you could make them longer and add more conversations, find the balance between conversations and narrative, though they´re excellent anyway, you're a pretty awsome writer, hope you don't take too long to update. :)
2/16/2012 c7 Hellsink Bathhall
Trish got her ass kicked really hard by this powerful devil. And it sounds like he did something else to her that was just as horrible to her or it could be just me. If it is the case, then Dante has even more motivation to kick Eblis' ass as if he needed anymore.
Isn't it a bit early for Mundus to be showing up again since he was defeated so recently. Somebody sped up the recovery process I see. Unfortunately Nero doesn't know that it was the devil lord he was witnessing right before his eyes. It's never a good sign to have him back.
Trish got her ass kicked really hard by this powerful devil. And it sounds like he did something else to her that was just as horrible to her or it could be just me. If it is the case, then Dante has even more motivation to kick Eblis' ass as if he needed anymore.
Isn't it a bit early for Mundus to be showing up again since he was defeated so recently. Somebody sped up the recovery process I see. Unfortunately Nero doesn't know that it was the devil lord he was witnessing right before his eyes. It's never a good sign to have him back.
2/15/2012 c7 bluefairy60
I have to wonder, Is Eblis lookin for a death wish after what he did to Trish and taking Kyrie captive? Those three orbs in the sky, I could be wrong but I think that's Mundus watching them. Kind of freaky. Another great story. Btw is your other story on hold at the moment?
I have to wonder, Is Eblis lookin for a death wish after what he did to Trish and taking Kyrie captive? Those three orbs in the sky, I could be wrong but I think that's Mundus watching them. Kind of freaky. Another great story. Btw is your other story on hold at the moment?
2/15/2012 c7 BignStrong
Very well written.
Very well written.
2/15/2012 c7 Meech Macko
The chap is well crafted but not much ongoing development and this chap lead to more questions and big mysteries.
Still its going fine,So is Dante going to use the much powerful Sparda sword or stick to Rebellion.
The chap is well crafted but not much ongoing development and this chap lead to more questions and big mysteries.
Still its going fine,So is Dante going to use the much powerful Sparda sword or stick to Rebellion.
2/15/2012 c7
1Purrvana
Awesome job so much detail that you can picture her fiting good job really hope wen I post mi first story u can give me advice

Awesome job so much detail that you can picture her fiting good job really hope wen I post mi first story u can give me advice
2/7/2012 c6 jennyya
it´s getting better and better, the chapter was a little short though very interesting as always, hope you update soon, just like your other story please!. Keep it up as good as now.
it´s getting better and better, the chapter was a little short though very interesting as always, hope you update soon, just like your other story please!. Keep it up as good as now.
1/22/2012 c6 BignStrong
Meh... :D Well written (: And most exciting. I am sincerely looking forward to the next chapter.
Meh... :D Well written (: And most exciting. I am sincerely looking forward to the next chapter.
1/21/2012 c6 Hellsink Bathhall
At least Nero knows who the hell Mundus was. Good to see that he pays attention to some of the things the Order preached. Wonderful. Invisible demons. Who wouldn't want to fight those. At least Predators don't attack you when they are invisible since they have honor.
And thus Kyrie was captured. Are they bad enough dudes to rescue her?
This chapter was a bit short for my liking.
I doubt that this devil will want to be friends with Dante and co in the end unlike with Trish.
Sooner or later Dante and Trish will have to explain their past with Nero since he will not let it go.
Cuteness does not work on me but nice try.
Keep up the fine work.
At least Nero knows who the hell Mundus was. Good to see that he pays attention to some of the things the Order preached. Wonderful. Invisible demons. Who wouldn't want to fight those. At least Predators don't attack you when they are invisible since they have honor.
And thus Kyrie was captured. Are they bad enough dudes to rescue her?
This chapter was a bit short for my liking.
I doubt that this devil will want to be friends with Dante and co in the end unlike with Trish.
Sooner or later Dante and Trish will have to explain their past with Nero since he will not let it go.
Cuteness does not work on me but nice try.
Keep up the fine work.
1/21/2012 c6
1Angelforever06
I love it but it was too short! I need more XD Great chapter! Keep up the good work!

I love it but it was too short! I need more XD Great chapter! Keep up the good work!
1/21/2012 c6 Meech Macko
The fic turns is getting interesting and Dante and trish bond is great too
Your writing part is good easy to read so no probs there...just focus a bit more on the supernatural power part of Dante and Trish...maybe Nero too...but I don't think he is born part demon ...maybe experimented by Agnus guy.
The fic turns is getting interesting and Dante and trish bond is great too
Your writing part is good easy to read so no probs there...just focus a bit more on the supernatural power part of Dante and Trish...maybe Nero too...but I don't think he is born part demon ...maybe experimented by Agnus guy.
1/21/2012 c6 Lili
Luv ur story kk
Luv ur story kk
1/21/2012 c6 dippychick16
Kyrie really needs to invest in some self-defence lessons or something, it would save Nero a hell of a lot of stress! Look forward to the next chapter hopefully learn more about creepy demon dude.
Kyrie really needs to invest in some self-defence lessons or something, it would save Nero a hell of a lot of stress! Look forward to the next chapter hopefully learn more about creepy demon dude.