for Nightingale12/5/2011 c3 
1Angelforever06
Hey totally love the chapter 3 haha it was really suprising. Dear kyrie is so scared of Dante now.haha keep up the good work!
1Angelforever06Hey totally love the chapter 3 haha it was really suprising. Dear kyrie is so scared of Dante now.haha keep up the good work!
12/5/2011 c3 Angelforever06
Hey totally love the chapter 3 haha it was really suprising. Dear kyrie is so scared of Dante now.haha keep up the good work!
Hey totally love the chapter 3 haha it was really suprising. Dear kyrie is so scared of Dante now.haha keep up the good work!
11/25/2011 c2 288dragon06
Nice chapter. Well written. So, now their on the move. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
288dragon06Nice chapter. Well written. So, now their on the move. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
11/25/2011 c2 1The7thSin
I just loooved the 2nd chapter . It was rather enjoyable but it would be nice if it was longer . Anyway u just nailed it with the beginning .
1The7thSinI just loooved the 2nd chapter . It was rather enjoyable but it would be nice if it was longer . Anyway u just nailed it with the beginning .
11/22/2011 c1 1The7thSin
O wow ! This is such a beautiful start to a story. I really liked the use of lyrics to start the fic to set the backgroung mood . The ending just killed me.Brilliant use of suspense,and now I can't wait to read the next chapter!Also the intro isn't rushed like someother fics ! Luv it
1The7thSinO wow ! This is such a beautiful start to a story. I really liked the use of lyrics to start the fic to set the backgroung mood . The ending just killed me.Brilliant use of suspense,and now I can't wait to read the next chapter!Also the intro isn't rushed like someother fics ! Luv it