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6Ginipig
This is a really cute, clever story. Glad I found it! (Though I have to say, I bet Harry and Percy would get along GREAT, since Percy would pretty much be a mini version of Harry.)
6GinipigThis is a really cute, clever story. Glad I found it! (Though I have to say, I bet Harry and Percy would get along GREAT, since Percy would pretty much be a mini version of Harry.)
1/11/2012 c3 strangebloke
the moment where Annabeth calmly states that she can't drink is a great one. you've built up all of these similarities, and then you just sort of throw a curveball and show us how different they are.
Once again I think you've nailed Annabeth's character. Hyperintelligent, not very quick to volunteer information and very ready to receive it. good job. may find cause to avoid homework in the near future.
the moment where Annabeth calmly states that she can't drink is a great one. you've built up all of these similarities, and then you just sort of throw a curveball and show us how different they are.
Once again I think you've nailed Annabeth's character. Hyperintelligent, not very quick to volunteer information and very ready to receive it. good job. may find cause to avoid homework in the near future.
1/11/2012 c3 16Proud to be Plug
Fear not, both characters are completely IC here. Murph's reaction to Annabeth saying she is a demigod is very good. After all, whenever Harry mentions demigods it's with a deep sense of foreboding!
Also, I think you're quite right in what you said in the author's note at the end. Considering Annabeth was at camp full-time for many of her formative years, your supposition makes sense.
My only quibble is a very minor one: Annabeth asks Murphy what her deal is, but I'm not sure that Annabeth would say something in that way. I think she'd be more likely to something like "What's your position?" or "Where are you coming from on this?"
Other than that, nice job!
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16Proud to be PlugFear not, both characters are completely IC here. Murph's reaction to Annabeth saying she is a demigod is very good. After all, whenever Harry mentions demigods it's with a deep sense of foreboding!
Also, I think you're quite right in what you said in the author's note at the end. Considering Annabeth was at camp full-time for many of her formative years, your supposition makes sense.
My only quibble is a very minor one: Annabeth asks Murphy what her deal is, but I'm not sure that Annabeth would say something in that way. I think she'd be more likely to something like "What's your position?" or "Where are you coming from on this?"
Other than that, nice job!
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1/8/2012 c2 Proud to be Plug
This is pretty good. Both of them are IC, as far as I can tell. However, there was at least one POV switch, which was somewhat jarring.
The idea is remaining interesting, though. There's not enough here to give much feedback on, though one idea I had was you could have a few Percy Jackson/Dresden characters bump into each other, like Nico and Morty, Thalia and Elaine, perhaps even Thomas and Drew!
Nice job, anyway. Looking forward to more!
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This is pretty good. Both of them are IC, as far as I can tell. However, there was at least one POV switch, which was somewhat jarring.
The idea is remaining interesting, though. There's not enough here to give much feedback on, though one idea I had was you could have a few Percy Jackson/Dresden characters bump into each other, like Nico and Morty, Thalia and Elaine, perhaps even Thomas and Drew!
Nice job, anyway. Looking forward to more!
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12/16/2011 c1 Proud to be Plug
I went looking for crossovers of this kind, and lo and behold, this is the only one! So well done on your pioneering this area of fanfic.
It's interesting. Annabeth is IC, as far as I can tell, and so is Murph. Your grammar and spelling are all fine, too. There's just not enough for me to give more feedback. I would definitely like to see more, though. Please keep it up!
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I went looking for crossovers of this kind, and lo and behold, this is the only one! So well done on your pioneering this area of fanfic.
It's interesting. Annabeth is IC, as far as I can tell, and so is Murph. Your grammar and spelling are all fine, too. There's just not enough for me to give more feedback. I would definitely like to see more, though. Please keep it up!
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12/2/2011 c1 52Musafreen
Oh yes there are worse crossovers. there are plenty worse crossovers. XD They are hard to pull off, as a rule. ALso, DF characters sort of out-badass the PJo characters, but that could just be me.
It's interesting so far. I'd read a continuation. :)
52MusafreenOh yes there are worse crossovers. there are plenty worse crossovers. XD They are hard to pull off, as a rule. ALso, DF characters sort of out-badass the PJo characters, but that could just be me.
It's interesting so far. I'd read a continuation. :)
11/27/2011 c1 pyrotigre
it defenetly has potential. could have been worse. it is, however, the worse dresden/pjo crossover i have ever read. it is also the best one. needed to be done.
it defenetly has potential. could have been worse. it is, however, the worse dresden/pjo crossover i have ever read. it is also the best one. needed to be done.
11/23/2011 c1 7strangebloke
I've been waiting for someone to write this! In fact, I was on the verge of writing my own, longer, crossover. I might still.
Nonetheless, you've gotten off to a pretty good start. Annabeth and Karrin are both in character, more or less, and your writing style is pretty decent.
I'm a little unclear as to what point in the percy jackson series this is... is this placed shortly after the Mount St. Helens field trip?
Anyway, I'm glad that someone else sees the potential here. cheers!
7strangeblokeI've been waiting for someone to write this! In fact, I was on the verge of writing my own, longer, crossover. I might still.
Nonetheless, you've gotten off to a pretty good start. Annabeth and Karrin are both in character, more or less, and your writing style is pretty decent.
I'm a little unclear as to what point in the percy jackson series this is... is this placed shortly after the Mount St. Helens field trip?
Anyway, I'm glad that someone else sees the potential here. cheers!