
2/22/2021 c25 Guest
Ummm... excuse me... it just ends like that? Please tell me you’re planning on updating this story I need to know how it ends!
Ummm... excuse me... it just ends like that? Please tell me you’re planning on updating this story I need to know how it ends!
12/15/2020 c25 Guest
More please or add a note saying where I can find the end please.
More please or add a note saying where I can find the end please.
11/2/2020 c25 SushiTime
Can you write another chapter?
Can you write another chapter?
10/9/2020 c25 M60476zeus
So first, I don’t normally read WIP, but I have truly enjoyed your writing. I like that you’re giving your character’s difficulties so they can grow. I also really hope you finish this story. Thanks for your efforts
So first, I don’t normally read WIP, but I have truly enjoyed your writing. I like that you’re giving your character’s difficulties so they can grow. I also really hope you finish this story. Thanks for your efforts
6/28/2020 c25
6ArielApostolos
Holy crap this story is so good! I'm loving it, especially the intrinsic draw between Bella and Alice. Their passion and intensity is so yummy. I do so hope to see this continued.

Holy crap this story is so good! I'm loving it, especially the intrinsic draw between Bella and Alice. Their passion and intensity is so yummy. I do so hope to see this continued.
6/1/2020 c25
3starlighttauriel
Things are heating up a bit more. Was it Jasper that initially told the Volturi? What’s up with the black marks from the dead vampire? Hopefully if they do go against the Volturi, the twins also decide to help Bella. (Like maybe Chelsea and Corin had forged their bonds, or maybe they became disillusioned after a time, or guilty that they were the cause of their friend’s/parents’ death.)
Hopefully, if Jasper truly loves Alice, he’ll give her up, since she chooses Bella. Anyway, can’t wait to read more!

Things are heating up a bit more. Was it Jasper that initially told the Volturi? What’s up with the black marks from the dead vampire? Hopefully if they do go against the Volturi, the twins also decide to help Bella. (Like maybe Chelsea and Corin had forged their bonds, or maybe they became disillusioned after a time, or guilty that they were the cause of their friend’s/parents’ death.)
Hopefully, if Jasper truly loves Alice, he’ll give her up, since she chooses Bella. Anyway, can’t wait to read more!