7/31/2012 c14 2Basic Blitz
Hey, it's me! Just wanted to review like always! I'm SO sorry about the writer's block! I really hope your find your inspiration! It must be very frustrating for you! D: I'm glad you pulled through with this bit though. It has very cute sections! I'm always here to help! :D
Idk if you're going to go back and revise this or not but, here are some tips:
(I'm trying something new for critique, but I started it halfway thru. X.X We'll see how this works out.)

they're split apart for what seems like miles. - They seemed galaxies apart.
Blitz flooded with the waters of adventure. - Blitz said, brimming with the newfound urge for adventure.
If Hecate finds you guys wondering around the castle then he'll be very mad - Change "very mad" to furious! Rawr! :3
"Then what do you purpose we do?" - It's "propose" like getting married. Awh! :)
"Hey how's it going." - No critique. I just laughed my ass off. XD
The boys shut their wanting eyes - Maybe "curious" eyes?
*realized you used curious in the next sentence* ...Oh. XP
What a cute scene with the girls and the guys at the very end. I Awwww-ed.:)

Okay, that's what I've got for you! I hope for the best with your writer's block! Conquer it!

7/30/2012 c14 4Comrade Athelwine
Hey Zele, I know You are pressured, and all and I dont want to put any more pressure upon you :(

I Love What you HAVE written but I am a bit bummed out of the shortness... mainly because you are so awesome at writing!

I love how LL is kind of the Older brother in this story XD Also that he actually thinks like that, Its funny! Loved the Brother-Sister argument :)

Though Im a bit confused... is Sonic Dead? Or well, Dead Enough to leave his body at least?

6/29/2012 c13 2Basic Blitz
WhOa! The reviewing ways have changed! OO Cool.

Oh. Hi! :D So *ehem* yeahhh...I'm just a tad bit late reviewing...*puts up shield* Don't kill me! o.o I shall review nonetheless! Heheee...
I had an awesome fighting scene! :D Hurray! But I, uh...That word is not in my vocabulary! O_O Moving on!

LeeLin! *jumps up on brother* I finally see you! Wow you haven't changed a bit- wait...what's that? You want to take my Devon... -_- In your dreams, Blondie.
Haha I kid the Comrade. x) I thought it was cute how you made Devon and Shadow jealous of LeeLin. I was giggling. ;3 And what a CUTE comforting moment you made with Kiya and Shadow. I accidentally said out loud, "Awh!" and from across the room my bro gave me this look like I had just started talking to plants. x) Hahaa

OMG Sonic is missing! D: He was having such an epic fight scene with Mr. EvilPants the 2nd and then he just went POOF! And I'm guessing not the good kind of poof. -_- Poor guy! Sonic! Come back to AMY! She needs you. D:

Oh, critique...we're still doing that? o.O Oh crap here we go...
Okay, maybe when they were in the prison, you should describe the atmosphere. Like: was it cold and damp? Did it have a damp smell? Did their voices echo? Etc, etc. You could even say what KIND of cold it was if you wanna go that in depth. There's a cold like at night: A cold that makes you feel alive, easy to breathe, and it has an edge to it. There's a cold like in a basement or like a fog: Musty, thick air, smells kind funny, almost like it sticks to you, like you can smell rotting plants. (EW!) And there's just a plain cold: you shiver, you see your breath, it gnaws at your skin like a hungry animal, it make you immobile because you just wanna shiver.
Yeah! There's my critique for you! Wow, another long review! :D Hurray! Have fun reading this. x) Haha Okay, so UPdaTE soON! And I'll hear from you soon, buddy! :)

6/27/2012 c13 Rin-sama and Len-kun
Yes! They've gotten back together! I bet Sonic and Amy are sooooo happy!

Yeah, I just beat Sonic and the Black Knight again, so I'm overflowing with SonAmy spirit! :DDD

Please update when you can!

Danielle

6/16/2012 c12 Rin-sama and Len-kun
Yayayay! You updated! Sorry I didn't review sooner! All my files were deleted, I have swimming lessons, and a adoration for Soul Eater now.

Soul-Yep. Cause cool guys like me are meant to be adored! B)

Maka-You idiot! I'm reading Light and Love: Spring of Dreams! Give me some silence! D: *smacks him*

Please update soon! I wanna see what happens!

Dani, Soul, and Maka

5/31/2012 c12 2Basic Blitz
HELLOO BEST BUDDY! :D

Yes, another chapter completed! Wonderful job! And I mean it! You improved A LOT! Your descriptions are fantastic! Extra amazing! :D You might be as good as me now!

Omg Devon is so adorbs! :3 When he said, "That's my girl" I was thinking, "Yes I am. ;3" hehee. And I caught Eggman! :D What's my prize? Devon? *hugs Devon* If you insist! ;D Somehow I knew I would get him to talk. *cracks knuckles and draws sword*

And the Sonamy romance part: TOTAL KNOCKOUT! That was one of the best kissing scenes I've read in your stories! :) Good good good!

And Hecate...I don't know WHAT to think of him anymore. o.o He's evil and obsessed! He likes Amy because she's pretty so he watches her while she sleeps...if that doesn't say creeper I don't know what does! And when he said, "That last name made me barf a little."...I died laughing. XD

Okay, critique...uh...*searches* I guess if I were going to say something helpful, it'd be that when Hecate thinks: "It was him. That bastard was infecting my sweets dreams!" it really should be sweet's because it's possessive. :3 Haha really awesome chapter! Super proud! .

Okay, that's it for me...I still wrote a lot even when I PM you. XD Typical Blitz! Writing paragraphs of nonsense! Okay, RESOLVE THAT CLIFFHANGER! Aaaanndddd UPDATE SOON! :D .

P.S: There is a random period floating after that super smiley face...O.o What does it MEAN?

5/31/2012 c12 3paperpolaroid
Thank you for informing me Molly.

M-My names Sarah. he replied. I hated to be proven wrong, so I glared down at her with a smile.

Well then you'll have to change your name, because now it's Molly.

Me: SHE SAID HER NAME WAS MOLLY BA****RD!*bashes up Heacate*

anyway awwww there of to save amy! and i really AOL *Awwed out loud* at the kiss

XD my face seeing the kiss.

plzz update soon *gives cookies back* but u better update soon or else *holds eggman hostage*

wait, eggman...? meh it's still a sonic character.