for Light and Love: Spring of Dreams4/8/2012 c9 
20-Eeveelution-0
Great job! I loved the chapter! (Really cute 3) I wonder if Amy will wake up... I hope she does!
Nice job with grammar, spelling, and details! (Especially details XP) I look forward to seeing you update! :)
PS: I used to be Kairi Hart
20-Eeveelution-0Great job! I loved the chapter! (Really cute 3) I wonder if Amy will wake up... I hope she does!
Nice job with grammar, spelling, and details! (Especially details XP) I look forward to seeing you update! :)
PS: I used to be Kairi Hart
4/2/2012 c9 1Sapphire Starshimmer
oh. god. i got a horrible headache and i went home from school then ended up sleeping from 11 to 7, my day kinda has sucked so far, but this made me crack up so hard it was worth looking at my bright computer!
1Sapphire Starshimmeroh. god. i got a horrible headache and i went home from school then ended up sleeping from 11 to 7, my day kinda has sucked so far, but this made me crack up so hard it was worth looking at my bright computer!
3/31/2012 c9 4Comrade Athelwine
Ooooohhh... I see... I get it then... Sorry for getting it the other way around... XD I guess i use too much time on nitpicking to see the important details :P Kind of stupid of me since i am working on a story myself.
Now sorry on the lateness of this review, but i happened to be in Prauge without any internet connection, at the time this came out... So This is the first i have written in a week... Hurrai!
Ok, on with the reviewing. *Takes on a Soviet Hat* (I bought it in prauge, Tihi :P).
As always the story is great, Oscar material, but I am after all forced by the reviewers curse to come up with some nitpicking, or else i will die at sundown O.o
So firstly I would say It felt a tiny bit strange when you decided to write
"She proudly bowed her head and apologized from the incorrect outburst and nervously added a comment about checking on Amy, and left the room in shame."
Instead of just actually writing the actions and the lines. It would perhaps to some be padding, and i guess you cant please all audiences, so its in the end fine :)
*Throws off Soviet Hat* "How Philosophical..."
Shut up LL, I will be comming back to you...
Anyway, I will have to say I have come to Love Blitz, and Kiya MORE than any of the other characters actually... XD I know many people come to read about the Sonic Characters, but for some reason, i think they could survive going Live and have their own franchise XD But well, SEGA never listens, So we will have to wait a bit more before we see "Blitz and Kiya the Hedgehog, The game" XD
I liked how Sonic chased after the two girls, and how they basically tricked him, using techniques that is simply something he cant get in his time XD
"So... You going to Ask Her?"
No im not! it would be disrespectful...
"Ok Then Ill Ask her-"
*Tries to shut up Hedgehog* No! Be quiet... Im reviewing here!
"But I want reviews too! T_T And Blitz feels lonely in the reviewing room..."
Just be Glad Blitz will read it, Shesh...
Sorry... Damn guy is like a Hummingbird on Coke in my head...
Well In the end, this chapter gains a 5/6 Hammers from the comrade :) I will be looking forwards to your next chapter while i try and sign a gag order for this guy,
"Hey!"
This is the Comrade, Signing off.
4Comrade AthelwineOoooohhh... I see... I get it then... Sorry for getting it the other way around... XD I guess i use too much time on nitpicking to see the important details :P Kind of stupid of me since i am working on a story myself.
Now sorry on the lateness of this review, but i happened to be in Prauge without any internet connection, at the time this came out... So This is the first i have written in a week... Hurrai!
Ok, on with the reviewing. *Takes on a Soviet Hat* (I bought it in prauge, Tihi :P).
As always the story is great, Oscar material, but I am after all forced by the reviewers curse to come up with some nitpicking, or else i will die at sundown O.o
So firstly I would say It felt a tiny bit strange when you decided to write
"She proudly bowed her head and apologized from the incorrect outburst and nervously added a comment about checking on Amy, and left the room in shame."
Instead of just actually writing the actions and the lines. It would perhaps to some be padding, and i guess you cant please all audiences, so its in the end fine :)
*Throws off Soviet Hat* "How Philosophical..."
Shut up LL, I will be comming back to you...
Anyway, I will have to say I have come to Love Blitz, and Kiya MORE than any of the other characters actually... XD I know many people come to read about the Sonic Characters, but for some reason, i think they could survive going Live and have their own franchise XD But well, SEGA never listens, So we will have to wait a bit more before we see "Blitz and Kiya the Hedgehog, The game" XD
I liked how Sonic chased after the two girls, and how they basically tricked him, using techniques that is simply something he cant get in his time XD
"So... You going to Ask Her?"
No im not! it would be disrespectful...
"Ok Then Ill Ask her-"
*Tries to shut up Hedgehog* No! Be quiet... Im reviewing here!
"But I want reviews too! T_T And Blitz feels lonely in the reviewing room..."
Just be Glad Blitz will read it, Shesh...
Sorry... Damn guy is like a Hummingbird on Coke in my head...
Well In the end, this chapter gains a 5/6 Hammers from the comrade :) I will be looking forwards to your next chapter while i try and sign a gag order for this guy,
"Hey!"
This is the Comrade, Signing off.
3/27/2012 c9 Blitz the Hedgehog
Do you like Flamethrowers? Yes we like flame throwers! Doo-do-do-doo Can't wait to burn a whole bunch! x)
Haha I just had to finish your song at the end :) Yes, even high schoolers know that song they just deny it. :D haha Well, hello again my best-est buddy! Another chapter up and completed! (and within a week too! Double celebration!) AND WHAT IS THIS? 50+ views? :o Triple threat! CELEBRATORY DANCE TIME! *disco ball drops from ceiling* WHOO! *dancing* I'm bringing the FIRE! I'm so glad I invested my money in this new disco ball! I even got the sexiness upgrade ^.^ hehee
Okay,*pant* I'm tired from dancing so let's move to reviewing! *pants and grabs a large hammer similar to Amy's but black and purple* Let's get it on!
It took me while to figure this out but I find your story hasn't yet established the main conflict. First, it was Amy and Sonic chained together but now they're better so...what next? Sure, me and Kiya are on some kind of time traveling adventure but where are the RISKS! Where's the suspense? Who is the bad guy? I understand that Eggman is an antagonist but what kind of threat does he pose against Sonic and Amy's relationship? Nothing besides the usual kidnapping, rescuing, and celebrating routine. :p Maybe I've jumped too far ahead and you're already planning to do that. If so, that's fantastic! Now it the time! If not, I would suggest starting the conflict between some characters. Sonic vs. Eggman because Eggman has found some emerald/magic crystal/shiny rock (hehe rock is shiny ^.^) that he could use against them? Maybe Amy gains super abilities when she came into contact with one of those shiny objects I just listed. The possibilities are endless! :D I know I haven't done this in awhile but maybe working off some writing will help you? Another example my brain willingly offered:
Together we gazed up. The flat black field around us made the sky as big as an ocean. It was cold, but a good cold, the sort that made you feel alive. Over our heads, the sky was so clear that we could see every star that could see us. My heart thumped faster, for a reason I couldn't pinpoint. I was suddenly very aware that Devon was inches away from me, watching with me, his breaths visible in front of his face.
"This is so close, it is so hard to believe" I said, my voice caught for some reason on the word believe, "that it isn't magic."
Devon kissed me.
His kiss landed sort of on the side of my mouth because my face was still turned up, but it was a real kiss, not a careful one. I turned toward him so that we could kiss again, properly. When we kissed, it didn't matter that I was leaving for battle as leader of the Nightfall warriors or that once I left I may never feel the pulse of his lips against mine ever again. It didn't matter that a thousand traps from life were laid for us as soon as we left this moment. All that mattered was this: our noses touching, the softness of his mouth, and the ache inside me.
AWHS! :3 Cute little moment I made with Devon and me looking at the stars. Devon is going to be in the next chapter XD AHHHH! My guy ^.^ Teehee
P.S all the boy problems worked out! XD Okay, that's all I've got, UPdaTE soON! :D BYE!
Do you like Flamethrowers? Yes we like flame throwers! Doo-do-do-doo Can't wait to burn a whole bunch! x)
Haha I just had to finish your song at the end :) Yes, even high schoolers know that song they just deny it. :D haha Well, hello again my best-est buddy! Another chapter up and completed! (and within a week too! Double celebration!) AND WHAT IS THIS? 50+ views? :o Triple threat! CELEBRATORY DANCE TIME! *disco ball drops from ceiling* WHOO! *dancing* I'm bringing the FIRE! I'm so glad I invested my money in this new disco ball! I even got the sexiness upgrade ^.^ hehee
Okay,*pant* I'm tired from dancing so let's move to reviewing! *pants and grabs a large hammer similar to Amy's but black and purple* Let's get it on!
It took me while to figure this out but I find your story hasn't yet established the main conflict. First, it was Amy and Sonic chained together but now they're better so...what next? Sure, me and Kiya are on some kind of time traveling adventure but where are the RISKS! Where's the suspense? Who is the bad guy? I understand that Eggman is an antagonist but what kind of threat does he pose against Sonic and Amy's relationship? Nothing besides the usual kidnapping, rescuing, and celebrating routine. :p Maybe I've jumped too far ahead and you're already planning to do that. If so, that's fantastic! Now it the time! If not, I would suggest starting the conflict between some characters. Sonic vs. Eggman because Eggman has found some emerald/magic crystal/shiny rock (hehe rock is shiny ^.^) that he could use against them? Maybe Amy gains super abilities when she came into contact with one of those shiny objects I just listed. The possibilities are endless! :D I know I haven't done this in awhile but maybe working off some writing will help you? Another example my brain willingly offered:
Together we gazed up. The flat black field around us made the sky as big as an ocean. It was cold, but a good cold, the sort that made you feel alive. Over our heads, the sky was so clear that we could see every star that could see us. My heart thumped faster, for a reason I couldn't pinpoint. I was suddenly very aware that Devon was inches away from me, watching with me, his breaths visible in front of his face.
"This is so close, it is so hard to believe" I said, my voice caught for some reason on the word believe, "that it isn't magic."
Devon kissed me.
His kiss landed sort of on the side of my mouth because my face was still turned up, but it was a real kiss, not a careful one. I turned toward him so that we could kiss again, properly. When we kissed, it didn't matter that I was leaving for battle as leader of the Nightfall warriors or that once I left I may never feel the pulse of his lips against mine ever again. It didn't matter that a thousand traps from life were laid for us as soon as we left this moment. All that mattered was this: our noses touching, the softness of his mouth, and the ache inside me.
AWHS! :3 Cute little moment I made with Devon and me looking at the stars. Devon is going to be in the next chapter XD AHHHH! My guy ^.^ Teehee
P.S all the boy problems worked out! XD Okay, that's all I've got, UPdaTE soON! :D BYE!
3/26/2012 c9 Rin-sama and Len-kun
A thumb was over the lense, lol, poor Kiya! AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN THIS WASN'T GOOD? This was one of my -BLEEP-ing favorite stories, EVER! *pants after rant, and becomes strangely cheery* Please update soon! ^^ *candy wrapper falls out of pocket*
You didn't see nothing...
PS: SONAMY forever!
～♪ Dani ♪～
A thumb was over the lense, lol, poor Kiya! AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN THIS WASN'T GOOD? This was one of my -BLEEP-ing favorite stories, EVER! *pants after rant, and becomes strangely cheery* Please update soon! ^^ *candy wrapper falls out of pocket*
You didn't see nothing...
PS: SONAMY forever!
～♪ Dani ♪～
3/26/2012 c9 AL3X TH3 H3DG3HOG
I thought that the chapter was funny and you did an awsome job on it. now as Yakko would say, goodnight everybody!
I thought that the chapter was funny and you did an awsome job on it. now as Yakko would say, goodnight everybody!
3/25/2012 c8 2MeadowsAndSunsets
Awww...come on upload chapter 9 already, I wanna see what Sonic does after the picture was taken! Haha lol he got caught!XD
2MeadowsAndSunsetsAwww...come on upload chapter 9 already, I wanna see what Sonic does after the picture was taken! Haha lol he got caught!XD
3/15/2012 c8 1thelovelylunareclipse
seriously, i hate this. needs ta go, girl. i want yu to stop this, it's rlly hurting my feelings. i've had enough. it makes my HEART hurt. EMOTIONALLY. thts wen yu kno you've done something to me. i don't get sad easily. you managed to get me sad. enough. im leaving this story. never.comming.back.again. I'm DONE.
LOL if you fell for tht, im sorry :P i'd never leave this story, so yu can be happy now.
but seriously, it did make me sad tht amy doesn't wanna wake up. let's set tht aside...
TOOOO MUCH FLUFFFFFFFF :)
this chapter was adorable, especially with Kumiko and Shadow. cuuute ;)
and sonic kissing amy just made the rest of my night. it was adorable, actually. and the fact tht kumiko and blitz caught it on camera was cute. Kumiko getting mad at the bathtub was adorable (wow i rlly need to find a thesaurus. im using 'cute' and 'adorable' a little too much for my taste -_-)
so i think yu get the gist, this chapter was just sweet and cute. THANKS FOR THE HAPPY CHAPTER ZEL! it cheered up my gloomy life a little :) honestly, i feel like those cartoons tht just have a storm cloud over their head all the time :/
When it comes to grammar yu pretty much have it down, and descriptions...do i really need to repeat it? but a good idea for this would be using METAPHORES. don't know what those are? look it up cuz im too lazy to explain right now (sorry for the rudeness ^-^').
BUT... what i rlly have to say about this chapter it tht...
I LOVED IT!
even when someone's not in the best mood, they can still enjoy a happy chapter of a good story, such as this one tht im reviewing right now :P
so, what im basically saying is WELL DONE (y) and I LOVED THIS (y)
so, update soon please!
-Lokita
1thelovelylunareclipseseriously, i hate this. needs ta go, girl. i want yu to stop this, it's rlly hurting my feelings. i've had enough. it makes my HEART hurt. EMOTIONALLY. thts wen yu kno you've done something to me. i don't get sad easily. you managed to get me sad. enough. im leaving this story. never.comming.back.again. I'm DONE.
LOL if you fell for tht, im sorry :P i'd never leave this story, so yu can be happy now.
but seriously, it did make me sad tht amy doesn't wanna wake up. let's set tht aside...
TOOOO MUCH FLUFFFFFFFF :)
this chapter was adorable, especially with Kumiko and Shadow. cuuute ;)
and sonic kissing amy just made the rest of my night. it was adorable, actually. and the fact tht kumiko and blitz caught it on camera was cute. Kumiko getting mad at the bathtub was adorable (wow i rlly need to find a thesaurus. im using 'cute' and 'adorable' a little too much for my taste -_-)
so i think yu get the gist, this chapter was just sweet and cute. THANKS FOR THE HAPPY CHAPTER ZEL! it cheered up my gloomy life a little :) honestly, i feel like those cartoons tht just have a storm cloud over their head all the time :/
When it comes to grammar yu pretty much have it down, and descriptions...do i really need to repeat it? but a good idea for this would be using METAPHORES. don't know what those are? look it up cuz im too lazy to explain right now (sorry for the rudeness ^-^').
BUT... what i rlly have to say about this chapter it tht...
I LOVED IT!
even when someone's not in the best mood, they can still enjoy a happy chapter of a good story, such as this one tht im reviewing right now :P
so, what im basically saying is WELL DONE (y) and I LOVED THIS (y)
so, update soon please!
-Lokita
3/14/2012 c8 Blitz the Hedgehog
Oh my goodness STOP THE WEDDING! Zel is alive! :D After days of endless boredom you turn up with yet another fantastic chapter! I'm gonna jump right into it since I really don't feel like talking a lot today. *hits head on wall* Boy problems. Ugh! T^T
OMG YOU WOULD NOT BELIEVE THE EXCITEMENT I FELT WHEN SHADOW WAS INTRODUCED! :D I jumped up and did the Shadow-a-major-hot-hedgehog-is-in-the-story dance!...a.k.a jumping up and down saying "Hottie is in the HOUSE!" :D
Awh! Awkward shower moment! :3 So adorable with Shadow and Kiya! Hmm...I wonder how me and Devon are gonna meet...^.^ your story! You decide! :D
Devon: I still don't have a speaking part!
Shush! You're going to ruin it for us!
Devon: *whines* But I'm bored!
We'll do some training later! Right now I'm reviewing with Zel!
Devon: Well...okay. T^T But after, MAKE ME A SAMMICH, WOMAN!
*Death glare* Excuse me? *raises flamethrower*
Devon: *gulps* I...uh...said MAKE ME...make you a sandwich...babe. *nervous smile*
*lowers gun* Extra mayo, sweetheart. *sly grin*
Well, moving on! Your metaphors are getting better :3 I understand they are REALLY hard to come up with. Even I'm not very good at using them. ^.^; haha Other than that I believe the story was great! Short maybe, but still amazing! :D P.S I GOT TO TAKE THE PICTURE! :D yay! Also, my flip fail...I couldn't breathe I was laughing so hard XD HAhAHA (random lowercase "h" in my laughter...o.o)
Devon: *explosion from kitchen* ...THE MAYONAISE IS ON FIRE!
*sighs* Not again. -.-
*turns around* POUR WATER ON IT!
Devon: Watery mayonaise? Gross!
Gross? Yesterday you ate a peanut off the sidewalk!
Devon:...it was honey roasted...
*facepalm* Men! *turns back* Well, I gotta take care of the burning mayonnaise in my kitchen. Please, UPDATE SOON! Like, sooner than usual! I understand the homework but don't procrastinate! (Like I'm doing right now.) And tell math to solve its own problems! :D
Devon: Honey! The mayonaise set fire to the sink! What now?
*sighs and turns around* Freeze-ray is in the cabinet on the left! *turns back* Yeah! I hope to see you later! Get inspired! Update! :)
Oh my goodness STOP THE WEDDING! Zel is alive! :D After days of endless boredom you turn up with yet another fantastic chapter! I'm gonna jump right into it since I really don't feel like talking a lot today. *hits head on wall* Boy problems. Ugh! T^T
OMG YOU WOULD NOT BELIEVE THE EXCITEMENT I FELT WHEN SHADOW WAS INTRODUCED! :D I jumped up and did the Shadow-a-major-hot-hedgehog-is-in-the-story dance!...a.k.a jumping up and down saying "Hottie is in the HOUSE!" :D
Awh! Awkward shower moment! :3 So adorable with Shadow and Kiya! Hmm...I wonder how me and Devon are gonna meet...^.^ your story! You decide! :D
Devon: I still don't have a speaking part!
Shush! You're going to ruin it for us!
Devon: *whines* But I'm bored!
We'll do some training later! Right now I'm reviewing with Zel!
Devon: Well...okay. T^T But after, MAKE ME A SAMMICH, WOMAN!
*Death glare* Excuse me? *raises flamethrower*
Devon: *gulps* I...uh...said MAKE ME...make you a sandwich...babe. *nervous smile*
*lowers gun* Extra mayo, sweetheart. *sly grin*
Well, moving on! Your metaphors are getting better :3 I understand they are REALLY hard to come up with. Even I'm not very good at using them. ^.^; haha Other than that I believe the story was great! Short maybe, but still amazing! :D P.S I GOT TO TAKE THE PICTURE! :D yay! Also, my flip fail...I couldn't breathe I was laughing so hard XD HAhAHA (random lowercase "h" in my laughter...o.o)
Devon: *explosion from kitchen* ...THE MAYONAISE IS ON FIRE!
*sighs* Not again. -.-
*turns around* POUR WATER ON IT!
Devon: Watery mayonaise? Gross!
Gross? Yesterday you ate a peanut off the sidewalk!
Devon:...it was honey roasted...
*facepalm* Men! *turns back* Well, I gotta take care of the burning mayonnaise in my kitchen. Please, UPDATE SOON! Like, sooner than usual! I understand the homework but don't procrastinate! (Like I'm doing right now.) And tell math to solve its own problems! :D
Devon: Honey! The mayonaise set fire to the sink! What now?
*sighs and turns around* Freeze-ray is in the cabinet on the left! *turns back* Yeah! I hope to see you later! Get inspired! Update! :)
3/14/2012 c8 20-Eeveelution-0
Once again, great job! (I love this story! So far, it's great!) The scene with Kiya and Shadow reminded me of this story, called "Milk and Marshmellows". It was a good story... (If you want to read it, it's on Danielle Fenton's profile, but it's sadly not Sonic), but I must say, this one's better!
Now, to stop talking like that..
I wonder if Amy will wake up? I'm seriously intrigued, (Gah! I'm talking like a old person!), so please! UPDATE WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE! :D ( I wish I knew what the end of middle school was like... I'm only a 7th Grader, along with Danielle Fenton)
Keep up the good work!
20-Eeveelution-0Once again, great job! (I love this story! So far, it's great!) The scene with Kiya and Shadow reminded me of this story, called "Milk and Marshmellows". It was a good story... (If you want to read it, it's on Danielle Fenton's profile, but it's sadly not Sonic), but I must say, this one's better!
Now, to stop talking like that..
I wonder if Amy will wake up? I'm seriously intrigued, (Gah! I'm talking like a old person!), so please! UPDATE WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE! :D ( I wish I knew what the end of middle school was like... I'm only a 7th Grader, along with Danielle Fenton)
Keep up the good work!
3/14/2012 c8 Rin-sama and Len-kun
Yes! Dani is back, and addicted to SonAmy (and SoKai) once more! :D
*suddenly begins bawling* NOOO! AMY! WAKE UP! *abruptly stops, and becomes a giggling fangirl* ITS LIKE THEY'RE MEANT TO BE! 3 *insert fan-girlish scream here* O.O Can I use that? Y'know, the future thing? ITS GENIUS!
Pleeeeeaaaaassseee update soon! I can't wait!
~♪ Dani ♪~
Yes! Dani is back, and addicted to SonAmy (and SoKai) once more! :D
*suddenly begins bawling* NOOO! AMY! WAKE UP! *abruptly stops, and becomes a giggling fangirl* ITS LIKE THEY'RE MEANT TO BE! 3 *insert fan-girlish scream here* O.O Can I use that? Y'know, the future thing? ITS GENIUS!
Pleeeeeaaaaassseee update soon! I can't wait!
~♪ Dani ♪~
3/12/2012 c8 4Comrade Athelwine
*Is not even able to get to review before golden Hedgehog runs in taking the Camera* "I Want a Copy!^^*
*Drags Hedgehog out*
Sorry about that... Im Writing too much about him lately...
Ok, On to the story :)
*Puts on random hat*
Since I now already broke Reviewers Law Twice with not making any critique, I must say a few points that bugged me.
Firstly it was a little short... I might not be one to complain since I write just about the same length, but i did feel that more could be inside this chapter.
To already shoot down my own argument, Then its your story and you decide when to place the Cliffhangers :)
Second Trouble for me, Is perhaps just me being a little perplexed about some characters reactions... I know that its 4000 years later, but oh my... If i Met the Reincarnation of my mother, it would more be weird for me to think of it like that... But well, Perhaps Shadow has a bit of a different way to be or put his hair XD
Also, I understand that it isnt that strange, but i would Firstly Tails to question for example about "Mana"... he is a man (Fox) of Science after all XD
*throws off the random hat and lets my hair go wild*
Ok then, beyond those Points, Which TRUELY were nitpicking by the way :P, i absolutely loved this chapter... It is always awesome to see that culture shock that can happen in between 4000 years XD
Shadow... you have no idea who you have fallen for... XD That has got to sting... :P
Also, Suddenly Blitz and Kiya have almost become Stalkers XD They got the camera, now they just need to be able to hide... XD
*Gets Tackled by Hedgehog* "Let me take the Chair! I want to Talk!"
Ok ok, Sit god daim it... -_-
*Hedgehog sits* "Yus!..."
.
.
.
.
.
.
What are you doing?
"Nothing, i just wanted your Chair" *evil snigger*
Oh Your having it now!... And no, not meant that way...
"Aw T_T"
Anyways... I will be looking forward to the next chapter :) I will just wrestle with this guy in the meantime... He keeps running around my head like a Hummingbird on Coke...
But he got his own story now so, he needs to learn when to be quiet...*Sits on top of him*
Stay...
This is The Comrade, Signing off.
4Comrade Athelwine*Is not even able to get to review before golden Hedgehog runs in taking the Camera* "I Want a Copy!^^*
*Drags Hedgehog out*
Sorry about that... Im Writing too much about him lately...
Ok, On to the story :)
*Puts on random hat*
Since I now already broke Reviewers Law Twice with not making any critique, I must say a few points that bugged me.
Firstly it was a little short... I might not be one to complain since I write just about the same length, but i did feel that more could be inside this chapter.
To already shoot down my own argument, Then its your story and you decide when to place the Cliffhangers :)
Second Trouble for me, Is perhaps just me being a little perplexed about some characters reactions... I know that its 4000 years later, but oh my... If i Met the Reincarnation of my mother, it would more be weird for me to think of it like that... But well, Perhaps Shadow has a bit of a different way to be or put his hair XD
Also, I understand that it isnt that strange, but i would Firstly Tails to question for example about "Mana"... he is a man (Fox) of Science after all XD
*throws off the random hat and lets my hair go wild*
Ok then, beyond those Points, Which TRUELY were nitpicking by the way :P, i absolutely loved this chapter... It is always awesome to see that culture shock that can happen in between 4000 years XD
Shadow... you have no idea who you have fallen for... XD That has got to sting... :P
Also, Suddenly Blitz and Kiya have almost become Stalkers XD They got the camera, now they just need to be able to hide... XD
*Gets Tackled by Hedgehog* "Let me take the Chair! I want to Talk!"
Ok ok, Sit god daim it... -_-
*Hedgehog sits* "Yus!..."
.
.
.
.
.
.
What are you doing?
"Nothing, i just wanted your Chair" *evil snigger*
Oh Your having it now!... And no, not meant that way...
"Aw T_T"
Anyways... I will be looking forward to the next chapter :) I will just wrestle with this guy in the meantime... He keeps running around my head like a Hummingbird on Coke...
But he got his own story now so, he needs to learn when to be quiet...*Sits on top of him*
Stay...
This is The Comrade, Signing off.
3/12/2012 c8 TheWrathAbove
! sorry but YES! new chapter = EPIC WINNING
GREAT CHAPPE WRITE MORE SOON THANKS BYE! *runs away faster than super sonic at max speed*
! sorry but YES! new chapter = EPIC WINNING
GREAT CHAPPE WRITE MORE SOON THANKS BYE! *runs away faster than super sonic at max speed*
2/23/2012 c7 TheWrathAbove
YES, WENT CRAZY AND SHE HAD GUNS! ( MUHAHAHA ) But in all seriousness ( if that's even a word ) awesome story sorry about last time how I kinda blew up on ya there but I love that sonic isn't even fazed by the fact that blitz and kira ( I think thats her name ) traveled through time and all the other stuff they did. But all n all I really love the sonamy. I myself think that your light and love storys is the best sonamy storys on the internet and this is coming from someone who constenly looks for sonamy storys and keep up the good no scrach that, great work! You get great big double thumbs ups!
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CurlyTail16
YES, WENT CRAZY AND SHE HAD GUNS! ( MUHAHAHA ) But in all seriousness ( if that's even a word ) awesome story sorry about last time how I kinda blew up on ya there but I love that sonic isn't even fazed by the fact that blitz and kira ( I think thats her name ) traveled through time and all the other stuff they did. But all n all I really love the sonamy. I myself think that your light and love storys is the best sonamy storys on the internet and this is coming from someone who constenly looks for sonamy storys and keep up the good no scrach that, great work! You get great big double thumbs ups!
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CurlyTail16