for Numb Wings7/19/2022 c15 Guest
I feel bad for Kushina she gets no justice all the shit happening to her and she can't do a thing about it
I feel bad for Kushina she gets no justice all the shit happening to her and she can't do a thing about it
41/1/2019 c11 Critic
Kinda bs how hypnosis wont work on kyuubi when it has happened before
Kinda bs how hypnosis wont work on kyuubi when it has happened before
6/28/2017 c13 Blazer Of Lemons
frankly this chapter dissapointed me. An i know im on the fence on if i even want to continue. U had potential but u just in my pov u wasted it.
frankly this chapter dissapointed me. An i know im on the fence on if i even want to continue. U had potential but u just in my pov u wasted it.
12/8/2016 c10 Guestapo
The ROOT emotionless training kind of came out of left field in this chapter.
Until now, a lot of the plot was concentrated around showing the human elements. Naruto had a personality, Danzo seemed different than fanon, and you could tell that being in constant contact with a miasma of dark emotions kind of trumped whatever brainwashing was going on by how playfully bloodthirsty he was (Anko-lite).
The interaction with Kushina felt like you took ten steps back for no reason. I believe even less that he'd actually hold to the concept of loyalty, to Danzo of all people, w/ the fox as his companion. Cool fight, though.
The ROOT emotionless training kind of came out of left field in this chapter.
Until now, a lot of the plot was concentrated around showing the human elements. Naruto had a personality, Danzo seemed different than fanon, and you could tell that being in constant contact with a miasma of dark emotions kind of trumped whatever brainwashing was going on by how playfully bloodthirsty he was (Anko-lite).
The interaction with Kushina felt like you took ten steps back for no reason. I believe even less that he'd actually hold to the concept of loyalty, to Danzo of all people, w/ the fox as his companion. Cool fight, though.