for Upside Down9/4/2019 c1 Mirage
very cute, i hope there will be more
very cute, i hope there will be more
6/12/2016 c1 Random Peep
That was GREEEAAAAATTT!
That was GREEEAAAAATTT!
10/25/2014 c1 Guest
I like slash, but I'm so amused by the fact that fanfiction has come to the point where you feel more need to classify what non slash instead of slash.
I like slash, but I'm so amused by the fact that fanfiction has come to the point where you feel more need to classify what non slash instead of slash.
3/26/2013 c1 Shiro Yukino
Fuck! The endings cute. I can't seem to stop grinning. I had thought about this pairing before but I had never read one but I felt as if I had to read this one. And I'm glad I did. Though I'm confused about one thing. Aren't Ash and Gary the same age? You wrote that Gary is 21 while Ash is 19. I thought they were the same age as they began their first journey at the same time.
Well, anywho. Loved the sweet fluffiness of this story. And really well written.
Fuck! The endings cute. I can't seem to stop grinning. I had thought about this pairing before but I had never read one but I felt as if I had to read this one. And I'm glad I did. Though I'm confused about one thing. Aren't Ash and Gary the same age? You wrote that Gary is 21 while Ash is 19. I thought they were the same age as they began their first journey at the same time.
Well, anywho. Loved the sweet fluffiness of this story. And really well written.
8/15/2012 c1 
27EdeatheDemonFox
Now that was the perfect level of sweetness for my sweet tooth. That was so cute. Especially when Gary got jealous and was staring at a shirtless Ash. XD
27EdeatheDemonFoxNow that was the perfect level of sweetness for my sweet tooth. That was so cute. Especially when Gary got jealous and was staring at a shirtless Ash. XD
5/22/2012 c1 114BrokenBlackCat
You should continue this but I'm not forcing you :) But you really do write so well! I like it!
114BrokenBlackCatYou should continue this but I'm not forcing you :) But you really do write so well! I like it!
3/13/2012 c1 34crazy YinYang writer7
All I got to for this story is and I have been MIND BLOW by the sweet fluffyness of it.
*mutters* ouch! stupid sweet thooth
34crazy YinYang writer7All I got to for this story is and I have been MIND BLOW by the sweet fluffyness of it.
*mutters* ouch! stupid sweet thooth
12/17/2011 c1 Scattered Petals
This entire story is making me d'aww-ing and squealing like crazy lol. You wrote them so nicely, and so cute! ♥
This entire story is making me d'aww-ing and squealing like crazy lol. You wrote them so nicely, and so cute! ♥