for Finding Home11/26/2011 c1 HarryPotterFan
This seems like it could develop into a great story, you could go just about anywhere with it right now. I like the way you changed POV's. From third person giving the backround, to first person telling us a bit more. I'm looking forward to continuing reading this.
This seems like it could develop into a great story, you could go just about anywhere with it right now. I like the way you changed POV's. From third person giving the backround, to first person telling us a bit more. I'm looking forward to continuing reading this.