for Gatekeeper: Divinity12/17/2011 c2 2lazy2login
o.o I started reading the third chapter without reading the updated 2nd chapter. Had no idea what was going on lol. If you're replacing a chapter, delete the first one and then submit the revised one. Hopefully, then it will show on story alerts ^^;
idk :B
o.o I started reading the third chapter without reading the updated 2nd chapter. Had no idea what was going on lol. If you're replacing a chapter, delete the first one and then submit the revised one. Hopefully, then it will show on story alerts ^^;
idk :B
12/17/2011 c3 Guest
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12/5/2011 c2 
1Dylan The Crow
Nice job! Please keep going; this is one of the best FMA/Bleach crossover's I have seen so far. Nice Job! :)
1Dylan The CrowNice job! Please keep going; this is one of the best FMA/Bleach crossover's I have seen so far. Nice Job! :)
11/29/2011 c2 yuki-eevee
This is so good that I wanted to cry when I saw that there was not another chapter for me to on with my reading.
Have you ever had one of those big candy canes, usually the thickness of a roll of quarters?
This is so good that I wanted to cry when I saw that there was not another chapter for me to on with my reading.
Have you ever had one of those big candy canes, usually the thickness of a roll of quarters?
11/29/2011 c2 28Fluehatraya
Wow, what a quick update! I'm so happy, and am excited for the next chapter already!
28FluehatrayaWow, what a quick update! I'm so happy, and am excited for the next chapter already!
11/28/2011 c2 Enigmaster
Wow, this was a great chapter! Please update soon!
Wow, this was a great chapter! Please update soon!
11/27/2011 c1 Fluehatraya
What an interesting concept about the gates and universes. I look forward toward the next chapter.
What an interesting concept about the gates and universes. I look forward toward the next chapter.
11/27/2011 c1 Dune
OK. I laughed quite a bit here :) . Guess Ed is one that has so much bad luck, that he always end up with superior of the annoying type. Thougt you were free of Mustang? Here take Truth! The only actual plus is that at least Truth did'nt call him small. He called him kid instead. Not so much better, but it is'nt the S word. This storie is starting really well, I am impatient to see what you will make of it!
OK. I laughed quite a bit here :) . Guess Ed is one that has so much bad luck, that he always end up with superior of the annoying type. Thougt you were free of Mustang? Here take Truth! The only actual plus is that at least Truth did'nt call him small. He called him kid instead. Not so much better, but it is'nt the S word. This storie is starting really well, I am impatient to see what you will make of it!
11/27/2011 c1 Enigmaster
Hmm... I'm a little confused about what's happening, but I'm still very interested in it. I hope I can get a better understanding in your next update. Anyway, I like it.
Hmm... I'm a little confused about what's happening, but I'm still very interested in it. I hope I can get a better understanding in your next update. Anyway, I like it.
11/26/2011 c1 4Farmer Kyle
This chapter has me interested. But one thing that won't stop bugging me is your use of 'to' instead of 'too' when appropiate and similar errors. Other than that I'm interested just where this will go.
4Farmer KyleThis chapter has me interested. But one thing that won't stop bugging me is your use of 'to' instead of 'too' when appropiate and similar errors. Other than that I'm interested just where this will go.
11/26/2011 c1 Guest
This story is amazing! I wanna read the next chapter! ;) update soon!
This story is amazing! I wanna read the next chapter! ;) update soon!