
8/26/2018 c14 TheGreenPanther
I'm not sure why I never read this story, since I am a fan of your work. At any rate, I now have and I found it really interesting and enjoyed it very much. :o)
I'm not sure why I never read this story, since I am a fan of your work. At any rate, I now have and I found it really interesting and enjoyed it very much. :o)
11/24/2016 c14 karen4honor
So very beautiful! Well done and THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME AND EFFORT IN MAKING THIS STORY!
So very beautiful! Well done and THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME AND EFFORT IN MAKING THIS STORY!
10/16/2016 c14 IsabellaEdward17
This a very beautiful story... It's so surreal... I mean I can't even explain... The beauty of it... I can't say what's the best moment for me... The way Edward never forgave himself and Carlisle showed him the way...The moment when Alice came up... Showed him the potential futures... Or the moments he warred within himself as to what is right and wrong... It's been both a delight and educational and a pleasure to read your story... I hope u write more because you have gained a fan in me my friend... I adore your writing... While I may be the girl who likes fluff all the time... This is one beautiful story I'll read even if it made me cry with happiness and sadness at times... This a very lovely piece... Thank you for sharing such a beautiful story!
This a very beautiful story... It's so surreal... I mean I can't even explain... The beauty of it... I can't say what's the best moment for me... The way Edward never forgave himself and Carlisle showed him the way...The moment when Alice came up... Showed him the potential futures... Or the moments he warred within himself as to what is right and wrong... It's been both a delight and educational and a pleasure to read your story... I hope u write more because you have gained a fan in me my friend... I adore your writing... While I may be the girl who likes fluff all the time... This is one beautiful story I'll read even if it made me cry with happiness and sadness at times... This a very lovely piece... Thank you for sharing such a beautiful story!
3/3/2015 c1 locheree
I forgot to review when I got to the last chapter, but, yes, I read it all. My conclusion is that this is a very lovely story that, normally, just from the thought about it being mostly a story of church and judgement, I would have bypassed it. I am so happy that I didn't. You did this in the most tasteful way and I simply loved reading it. I love how you show in your story that Edward is worthy and that God had not forsaken him because of what he was. Kind of follows along with the actual story of Twilight, how he feels he doesn't have a soul and he isn't worthy of love because he would be selfish to damn another to that life. Very nice, by the way. Thank you for allowing me into your mind of fantasy and being a great story teller.
I forgot to review when I got to the last chapter, but, yes, I read it all. My conclusion is that this is a very lovely story that, normally, just from the thought about it being mostly a story of church and judgement, I would have bypassed it. I am so happy that I didn't. You did this in the most tasteful way and I simply loved reading it. I love how you show in your story that Edward is worthy and that God had not forsaken him because of what he was. Kind of follows along with the actual story of Twilight, how he feels he doesn't have a soul and he isn't worthy of love because he would be selfish to damn another to that life. Very nice, by the way. Thank you for allowing me into your mind of fantasy and being a great story teller.
7/11/2014 c14 FanficButterfly
Thank you for writing of Catholic priest Edward who remains devout and respectful to his values. This story is very enriching and so full of substance. You should write an actual book.
Thank you for writing of Catholic priest Edward who remains devout and respectful to his values. This story is very enriching and so full of substance. You should write an actual book.