for Surreal reality1/26/2013 c14 Kimmiko T
I really love this story!
Please update as soon as you can!
I think it should be named "Raven's Bond or The Raven's Tears"...you know sometimes to connect it to Shinichi...since he's called a raven sometimes...and Kaito's trying to find it to be with him...I think it fits.
Thanx!
Ja'ne!
Tantei-chan
I really love this story!
Please update as soon as you can!
I think it should be named "Raven's Bond or The Raven's Tears"...you know sometimes to connect it to Shinichi...since he's called a raven sometimes...and Kaito's trying to find it to be with him...I think it fits.
Thanx!
Ja'ne!
Tantei-chan
3/10/2012 c14 
4Amaranthais
I think that Sea of Tears would be a fitting name from the clues that there are and the curse upon the stone.
4AmaranthaisI think that Sea of Tears would be a fitting name from the clues that there are and the curse upon the stone.
3/9/2012 c14 Kaida-14Kage
Hello, great story so far. Really is intresting and like how you used what happened in the movies to fit your story. The relationship between Kaito and Shinichi is also developing quite well. I'll be waiting for more.
Too bad about your files getting erased...I hope you can manged to rewrite them :) And good luck on your exams! Best of luck to you!
Also about the name for Pandora...how about the Hope Dimond? Or something similair-only if you'd like of course. ^^
Hello, great story so far. Really is intresting and like how you used what happened in the movies to fit your story. The relationship between Kaito and Shinichi is also developing quite well. I'll be waiting for more.
Too bad about your files getting erased...I hope you can manged to rewrite them :) And good luck on your exams! Best of luck to you!
Also about the name for Pandora...how about the Hope Dimond? Or something similair-only if you'd like of course. ^^
12/8/2011 c6 Confused
Why do you have all the speech italicized? Your story isn't bad, although I think Shinichi is woefully out of character. I would read much more, but honestly the italics confuse me.
The quotation marks are enough to let us know that the characters are talking. The italics fool me into thinking that the conversation happened in the past. I'm forced to read and re-read portions just to figure out what's going on, which really pulls me out of the flow of the story.
Why do you have all the speech italicized? Your story isn't bad, although I think Shinichi is woefully out of character. I would read much more, but honestly the italics confuse me.
The quotation marks are enough to let us know that the characters are talking. The italics fool me into thinking that the conversation happened in the past. I'm forced to read and re-read portions just to figure out what's going on, which really pulls me out of the flow of the story.
12/5/2011 c14 Hikaru
I thought Haibara is immortal too? How did she die I mean a bullet to the heart but being immortal she will still die? O.O anyways anticipates more xD
I thought Haibara is immortal too? How did she die I mean a bullet to the heart but being immortal she will still die? O.O anyways anticipates more xD
12/5/2011 c2 12Questionable Answers
Ouch. Harsh.
And yet it makes a strange kind of sense.
the way you switch between characters is a little inconsistent, and i'd reccomend not having that note up as the first chapter as it is off putting.
I like this, and Ran will get over it.
thats all I have time to read right now, i'll definatly read the rest later, I want to find out where this is going.
12Questionable AnswersOuch. Harsh.
And yet it makes a strange kind of sense.
the way you switch between characters is a little inconsistent, and i'd reccomend not having that note up as the first chapter as it is off putting.
I like this, and Ran will get over it.
thats all I have time to read right now, i'll definatly read the rest later, I want to find out where this is going.
12/2/2011 c11 3waraa
No he didn't want 2 kill Ran bcz he was trained by the black organization, but if u remembr,the 1 training him had Ran's face. He unconsciously hates that face. I just wrote it cuz there is a saying that there r 3 people wid the same face, I might b wrong.
3waraaNo he didn't want 2 kill Ran bcz he was trained by the black organization, but if u remembr,the 1 training him had Ran's face. He unconsciously hates that face. I just wrote it cuz there is a saying that there r 3 people wid the same face, I might b wrong.
12/2/2011 c1 waraa
So they are in their last year of high school, near its end. Hope it clears the confusion, if not feel free 2 ask again. Sorry that I replied in parts cuz there was no return address and there is a word limit on the reviews.:( Enjoy if I can't ans ur Q's then I will right a note at the end of the story, clearing the confusions so keep sending them.
I have send ups coming up so I want 2 complete the story before then. If not, then after papers which will take alot of time. Hope he ending is ok and not rushed, if it ends;)
P.S. Again thank u every1 4 reviewing, I really look forward 2 them, even if I havn't asked 4 them. They r appreciated beyond words. They give me courage, that I am not writing crap. Thank u, once again 2 all those who have and who will review this story.
So they are in their last year of high school, near its end. Hope it clears the confusion, if not feel free 2 ask again. Sorry that I replied in parts cuz there was no return address and there is a word limit on the reviews.:( Enjoy if I can't ans ur Q's then I will right a note at the end of the story, clearing the confusions so keep sending them.
I have send ups coming up so I want 2 complete the story before then. If not, then after papers which will take alot of time. Hope he ending is ok and not rushed, if it ends;)
P.S. Again thank u every1 4 reviewing, I really look forward 2 them, even if I havn't asked 4 them. They r appreciated beyond words. They give me courage, that I am not writing crap. Thank u, once again 2 all those who have and who will review this story.
12/2/2011 c12 Hikaru
Wait. Did Shinku want to kill Ran because he's been trained by the Black organisation or what? Update xD I love this story plot xD
Wait. Did Shinku want to kill Ran because he's been trained by the Black organisation or what? Update xD I love this story plot xD
12/2/2011 c9 waraa
I really did mess up the timeline, I should have made it clear in the story, sorry 4 ur confusion. Anyway I will tell u right now, Shinchi is supposed to be 17 first year in high school and he changed to 7 years old I have made it seem that he started living at Agase after 6 months of his transformation and then the accident happened.When he came back almost 2 years later he would be around 9, almost 10.
I really did mess up the timeline, I should have made it clear in the story, sorry 4 ur confusion. Anyway I will tell u right now, Shinchi is supposed to be 17 first year in high school and he changed to 7 years old I have made it seem that he started living at Agase after 6 months of his transformation and then the accident happened.When he came back almost 2 years later he would be around 9, almost 10.
12/2/2011 c12 waraa
Saia right, thank you for reviewing the story. And its alright to ask questions cuz that means that you are reading the story really carefully. Anyway to ans your questions, No Conan is not wearing his glasses bcoz I wanted to convey the fact that Shinku is different from his high school self Shinichi, and Conan. I should have made it clear, idiot me.:(
Saia right, thank you for reviewing the story. And its alright to ask questions cuz that means that you are reading the story really carefully. Anyway to ans your questions, No Conan is not wearing his glasses bcoz I wanted to convey the fact that Shinku is different from his high school self Shinichi, and Conan. I should have made it clear, idiot me.:(
12/2/2011 c2 MysteryConan
This is so good! I'm gonna go read more now :). I like the way the persons are acting. It's not OOC. So shinichi likes kid already... :)
This is so good! I'm gonna go read more now :). I like the way the persons are acting. It's not OOC. So shinichi likes kid already... :)