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3/3/2013 c3 4BoqBeak
I haven't been out of this due to lack of interest. I was in the middle of a chapter, when there was a technical problem.
5/27/2012 c3 3OnFireGeek
Oooooh. Exciting to see you back up! Very nice chapter. I liked how you opened with H.J. saying that he was happy that he was writing as himself. It was a nice touch.
12/30/2011 c2 OnFireGeek
Dun dun duuuuuun! The plot thickens! I like this. The pacing is a bit slow, but it's not bad by any stretch of the imagination.
12/7/2011 c1 OnFireGeek
Oooooh. Alex like. I personally think that if this is the 1st chapter, you shouldn't say 'Henry Jekyll, now at age 15,'. I think that you could botch the 'now at' part, if that makes any sense. And I figured out that Poole is a guy! (I thought that Poole was a girl.) Learn something new every day, I guess. Very nicely done.
12/1/2011 c1 4BoqBeak
For whoever decides to review this, please look upon this with an open mind if you don't like the "Jekyll's father" subplot. It is essential, because it displays Henry Jekyll as having a "fine line" as in the lab, where the pride actually does kick in.

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